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Lost_Soul
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since 2003-04-17
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0 posted 2003-05-03 06:12 PM



This is another peom I did for school. I hope you like it.

My Favorite Place

when life gets hard,
And I need a rest,
I go to my special place.
To forget my stress.
This place is beautiful and safe.
No one can harm me with grandfather tree,
Watching over me.
Alone I sit and stare at the sky,
With nothing to do but watch the clouds go by.
Listening to the animals.
For once I’m at peace,
Out here alone,
As the wind blows by,
And the stars being to appear in the sky.
I sit here warm and happy
Just me, myself and I.



© Copyright 2003 Brandon Raich - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-05-03 06:21 PM


Very nice...James
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-05-03 07:06 PM


liked the write!!  

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icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2003-05-04 12:26 PM


We each should have a place like that.  Thanks for sharing it.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-05-04 05:02 AM


just beautiful! and I have a place just like that too!
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5 posted 2003-05-05 12:32 PM


It must be great to be able to retreat to a quiet soothing place to recuperate, and recharge one's batteries... I hope to find such a place myself... In the meantime, thanks for sharing yours... heh

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Florence

Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-05-07 10:40 AM


This is a wonderful poem.....
Those special places that bring a welcoming peace.  They're the best!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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7 posted 2003-05-07 12:02 PM


Brandon:

amazing - you know I used to do this in the woods - lie on the ground and look up
and made me feel at such peace with myself
Must do that soon
xxoo

Lost_Soul
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8 posted 2003-05-07 06:15 PM


Thanks everyone. I love to go to the woods and just be alone for awhile. I just wish I could do it more often.
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