Open Poetry #26 |
My Favorite Place |
Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
This is another peom I did for school. I hope you like it. My Favorite Place when life gets hard, And I need a rest, I go to my special place. To forget my stress. This place is beautiful and safe. No one can harm me with grandfather tree, Watching over me. Alone I sit and stare at the sky, With nothing to do but watch the clouds go by. Listening to the animals. For once I’m at peace, Out here alone, As the wind blows by, And the stars being to appear in the sky. I sit here warm and happy Just me, myself and I. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
liked the write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
We each should have a place like that. Thanks for sharing it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! and I have a place just like that too! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
It must be great to be able to retreat to a quiet soothing place to recuperate, and recharge one's batteries... I hope to find such a place myself... In the meantime, thanks for sharing yours... heh _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a wonderful poem..... Those special places that bring a welcoming peace. They're the best!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brandon: amazing - you know I used to do this in the woods - lie on the ground and look up and made me feel at such peace with myself Must do that soon xxoo |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
Thanks everyone. I love to go to the woods and just be alone for awhile. I just wish I could do it more often. |
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