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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Can You If I fantasies my write Paint the snow a pinker white Turn a breeze to angry rage Make lightening fill the page Will it flush your waiting mind? Clear the mist of nonaligned Let you see the sky of hew Magnify the crystal dew. Charge you like electric shock Make real the mocking birds mock Bring you to an instance pause Perhaps to see a Santa clause Would it really help the fare? Lift you to a moments dare Grab the seconds of your will Ride it in a reckless thrill If you say it can be done Then I have lost and you have won |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey...I win every time I click on your poetry. There's no gamble there, sy! Hugs, to you--now that I've had my morning seymour, maybe I can sleep... (oh..uh..don't go readin' anything into that folks!  ) 's to sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Gee Randy picked it up right away, LOL  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We always win when we read your poetry... its a win win rhyme time missed ya Stinkylove    |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodmorning Seymour I'm here early today, and I'm glad. I sure do wish that I coyuld rhyme poetry the way you do. When I read it, it seems as though I'm just skipping along. Have a good day. Heart Hugs, Ethel  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What was that whooshing sound? Ah yes, the flushing of one's mind... fill it up with more, Sy... I'm ready now!  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhhh ... now it's been far too long since I've had a chance to catch up on some reading. Boy, I've missed you and your wonderful writing Sy. Much enjoyed!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're a clever guy Sy This is refreshing to say the least....I liked it much!! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Every morn he pens a rhyme, That's darn near perfect every time, It almost makes one want to yell, How can this Sy guy write so well? But I don't and in silence sit, As I marvel at Sy's great wit, His pearls of wisdom I prefer, To read each day; good day, fine sir. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loved this Sy.. I know some people who would say I need my mind flushed.. maybe because I just know there is a Santa Claus!! Chai tea this beautiful spring morn? Good...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Just whipped out all my answers to the lovely people below, just shows you what geting old can do. I recieved you pictures and mail, glad you all had a good time. Missed you but then I always do. Randy sends his love as do I. WWRS Ethel You rhyme very well. Sunshine That whoosh was a Kit, Yes it has but I'm keeping tabs on you. Hugs and stuff. ethome, And you are a good friend. Tim, Hay Tim your right on my heels, LOL. Nancy, Randy will fly me right over, hugs. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I slept in...Morning Sy.  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!No contest...you will always win with words like this flowing through your pen....Wonderful... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
There are many winners here because we read your poetry. *s |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good morning Duncan Startime55 Thank you for the bravo. Chanson Clever reply, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) It can be done and I think too often we mislead our integrities in believing the spells and differences single words can cause! (big hugggsssssss) So now you tell me...do YOU think you can...we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Then I have lost and you have won. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - I know that every time I open one of your poems to read I won't be disappointed, like this one... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Thank you so much. |
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