Open Poetry #26 |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa ![]() |
two waves chose to meet on the sand gave birth to foam then merged back into the sea with a sigh |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri: utter passion bittersweet brilliant as always xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
![]() nite bri... ![]() |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I saw . . . I saw *smiling* |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The advance and retreat ceaseless. (And I love you guys, but don't you people ever sleep?) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the rythmic ebb and flow.....Nicely done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As quickly come, a memory made... beached 2...? soon? |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hmmmmm.... wondering if this happened at Corona Del Mar...... A well painted picture with depth and dimension, through the absolute minimum of words.....nicely captured! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thanks EverBody! ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the moth just sighed too....and then some... and then put this in me library... and now....Im off to find the other treasures on the beach ![]() You're the best I've ever felt ... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very, very nice... M |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Back with the others! unruly words! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I really like this one, too. |
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