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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-05-03 03:43 AM

two waves
   chose
       to meet
on the sand

            gave birth to foam

then merged back
   into the sea
                 with a sigh

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-05-03 03:59 AM

Bri:

utter passion
bittersweet
brilliant as always
xxoo

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-05-03 04:18 AM

nite bri...

(nobody saw that)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-05-03 04:20 AM

I saw . . . I saw

*smiling*

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2003-05-03 09:25 AM

The advance and retreat ceaseless.

(And I love you guys, but don't you people ever sleep?)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2003-05-03 09:36 AM

Love the rythmic ebb and flow.....Nicely done!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-05-03 09:39 AM

As quickly come,
a memory made...

beached 2...?
soon?

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-05-03 10:03 AM

Hmmmmm.... wondering if this happened at Corona Del Mar......

A well painted picture with depth and dimension, through the absolute minimum of words.....nicely captured!

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______________Ratleader______________

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

8 posted 2003-05-03 11:38 AM

thanks EverBody!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2003-05-04 08:17 PM

the moth just sighed too....and then some...
and then put this in me library...
and now....Im off to find the other treasures on the beach

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-05-04 08:40 PM

very, very nice...

M

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2003-05-05 09:30 PM

Back with the others! unruly words!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-05-06 10:36 AM

Library

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

13 posted 2003-05-06 11:06 PM

I really like this one, too.

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