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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
I'll be by your side I told her gently Softly making love by a fire's eyes In the raw emotion Of a quiet bond. This is a mitosis of two souls As they have searched the naked landscape Into plains of scarred dunes And have fallen, Helplessly, Into sands of understanding |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello Joe! Welcome to Passions! Fire away? I think your critique should say "fires started here"! Whew! Sure enjoyed this, as I hope you will check your E-mail for a Special Greeting, and enjoy it in return! Welcome to your new Passions home! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
WOW!!! I do love the landscape as presented here in your poem for sure. Excellent job of writing and a most inviting "Welcome!!!" to you. -Bob |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Joe: what a beautiful entrance! Welcome to PIP! this is lovely - you will love it here xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles) Mayday, mayday, fire in the hold, we've got a new talented poet setting these pages on flames...colorful poetic beautiful flames of course! This is an ardent and passionate debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Joe, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Joe, I enjoyed reading your first post and look forward to reading much more of your work. I do believe you will like it here. And..  Hugs, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is great.... I hope you enjoy it here.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Welcome to Passions  I'm sure you will like it here Tara |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
Thanks to everyone who wrote replies. I do believe I will like it here. I am very eager to read your poems as well. |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Welcome. Great poem although the title surely doesn't fir but hey that's alright. I hope you like it here. It's been great for me, I'm kinda like a new member because I've never really used this before. |
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