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Crying |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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It has been days The rain keeps falling In slates of heavy downpour In sprinkles of shower passing Heaven must know how I feel The persistant ache in my heart Coz the skies are crying The tears I am holding back so hard I feel so weak and tired From giving so much I know not what to do now Coz my heart has been ripped apart I just want to hide and sleep Never again coming awake Unless there should be a happy ending Else I'd rather be nailed and staked _,,,^.^,,,_ Florence [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (05-02-2003 12:27 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice thoughts and feelings expressed It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I too get gloomy thoughts when it rains and rains and rains... I do hope that some sunny weather and some smiles are forcasted in your near future though. God bless. -Bob Had to return to vote for this one. Good job. [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (05-02-2003 02:23 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
QjQ: Thank you...  At the time I wrote it, I really felt that blue...  Lighthousebob: Thanks Bob. Back in sunny island Singapore, it's sunshine everyday...  JamesMichael: Thank you James! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
So i guess you have moved on from there? and nay, i didn't find this melodramatic or Hallmarkish--i think you ended the poem at a good time, without dragging it on |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yo!!!! Thanks for the support friend! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you can count for more than just support from me, dude.. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I guess we all have these feelings sometimes very nice poem Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) There too are days when I feel hopeless watching the rain pour down and there are no colors in the horizon, but then there are other days I see the rain basically as a rejuvenation, a cleansing and if we embrace it we may find new colors before our eyes the moment the prisms shine through! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Florence, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
Many times have a felt the same, good write, and so easy to relate too, you expressed your feelings very well, keep up the great work |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is good..... Crying is a good release!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
kaile: Hehe.... Thanks for bringing this back on top... carol: Thanks for reading, Rita... And I love your signature... It's so true about friends.Mistletoe Angel: Yes, Noah... sometimes it does seem that the rain is washing everything unhappy away from the face of this earth. And a rainbow will be out after the rain... jaysh: Thank you for reading, Jaysh. Justbleu: Yeah, I agree, Bridgette. Crying is a good release. One can think so much better after a burst of tears... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoy the day, we are all here with a hug when you need it and then a big push, back up to the stars |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Thanks for reading, Midnitesun _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this can go on for a while... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
yeah, juz like a game of badminton _,,,^.^,,,_ Florence [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (05-13-2003 10:20 AM).] |
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