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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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When I close my eyes I can picture you So perfectly I can picture everything From your dark brown eyes And muscular chest Down to your bare feet When I close my eyes I feel the warmth of your body So close to mine So close That I can feel the heat radiate When I close my eyes I can feel your lips Softly brush against mine And at times Your lips kiss mine so passionaitely I can't get my breathe For what seems like an eternity When I close my eyes You are mine To have and to hold Like a threefold cord That never can be broke When I close my eyes I feel the passion The love When I close my eyes Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I like this, Julie, it's a great concept... imagination to love, thoughts to vision. You did this rather well, nice work.  Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That and then some is what I feel just breathing because I know you Julie.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Julie, You have out done yourself here. I very much like this post.... it is a poem of passion and dreams.. and it is intoxicating, the way it draws you along.... Your first line is your last.... and it completes a longing thought... I adore it and it goes into my library to read again. Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Sorry... didn't check the vote box the first time....I would love to see this one in a book. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Julie, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is definitely a romance poem that will always be a bookmark in your loves life book in a library of smiles! (big hugggsssssss) Love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, I believe this is the best poem I've ever read of yours. It's really good. I would love to see it in a book, so you have my vote....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Julie, one of your best! |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Julie, I really like this it is good always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a reassuring love poem, click for you |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I found a couple of your poems here and both were very good, but of the two I liked this one the best... full of passion and of course I loved the part about the threefold cord... So wonderful to know that Love is always with you my friend. -Bob |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Julie, if I were you, I would go around with my eyes closed all the time! tehe May I suggest a blindfold! You wouldn't want to miss a thing! Warm hugs, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is excellent, loner!! I like it very much! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Breathtaking. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...honest simple and sweet....but full of passionate longing. 'tis lovely Julie. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Your best, and you're one of our best. I felt honored just to read it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is very nice....SMILES here!!! Bridgette |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very Nicely done.....  Charisma |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Wow!  Wow!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - this one goes back to the top with my vote... BC |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is one of your best, Julie...  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I'm with the crowd, this is one of your best. And I, too, like threefold chord part. That is truly when it cannot be broken. Well done here's my click. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I too agree one of your best you have out done yourself.. enjoyed obviously!!If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely Julie.  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Hi Loner, Yes, I like this. You have changed your style and have grown alot since I've last been here (a couple of months it seems like) Good work. SG |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I enjoyed this one too, Julie..catch those few spelling errors when it gets voted in. so passionaitely... should be passionately I can't get my breathe ...and this should be breath otherwise very good work. ~A~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Julie, love is being able to see someone clearly with your eyes closed and smiling, and you said this perfectly. I think this is your very best poem ever! |
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