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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
And if I weren't gritty Would you have still wanted me? Down to earth I am Down to earth is where you Found me & for a while, did I Not please you? I am flawed Like so many others before Enamored or awed by The image of rainbows & Mystery You've finally arrived At me But don't be Terribly disappointed You were sweeter than Rain washed skies To me, You were more than A carefully constructed phrase in time or space More than white candles Or lace praises that with a click can disappear like confessions on a deaf ear See, I favored us both & swore an oath To let it all float softly Down to earth & settle Here... Sunkissed. "I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is so beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I hope now love has tread you softly back down to earth without either of you falling and now forgiveness and comfort has been made! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I always love your gorgeous writings and am voting for this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Confessions on a deaf ear... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very beatiful... My votes in! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Always enjoy your music. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
How lovely. I almost wonder if it should be an epitaph, and not an epilogue.  Rich with feeling and simply impressive verse. I'll vote.Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Terribly disappointed You were sweeter than Rain washed skies To me, You were more than A carefully constructed phrase in time or space More than white candles Or lace praises that with a click can disappear like confessions on a deaf ear ============================== what a lovely unique write this is... wonderful imagery and phrasing. excellent SK!! " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lovely yet sad!!!! Bridgette |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I like the gritty/down to earth play. Very nice. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Good... very sad! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sweet and nicely laid out! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Can't believe I missed this when it was first posted! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soft and sweetly passionate |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunkissed - very nicely written, my vote... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bittersweet, but beautiful writing. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a click can disappear like confessions on a deaf ear .. .. To let it all float softly Down to earth & settle Here... --------------------- this is excellent writing... liked it very much... regards, sudhir |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice way of conveying the thought. Leaves one pondering..well done.. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the way this one is broken...it reads well |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
You've got my vote Dawn |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lucky is he who has been kissed by the sun! Expressive--and impressive!--writing. Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Beautifully sad. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful images, as autumn fades to winter's cold. A contenhder for sure. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I thought I had already voted to this poem... apparently I haven't..until now..  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Or lace praises that with a click can disappear like confessions on a deaf ear Really enjoyed quite a few of the descriptive passages very much. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
SunKissed, Enjoyed every line. This is wonderful and unique. Loved the ending. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Yes this one was nicely done, my vote also. Jason |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool.... hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
That's very sweet, SK. It has a ring of melancholy, tinged with hope. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed the read very much Charisma |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great writing. I like the sense of personality you brought out in this. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully sad to me...I like them that way |
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