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Full Moon Fantasy

She walks in crystal moonbeams
where sand meets the sea
feeling her desire build
Lost in rhythmic rhapsody

His vision fills her mind
His touch becomes the midnight air
And with the fluttering of angel’s wing
Her wish has brought him there

As eyes meet and lips collide
Passion is uncontrolled
It is tonight it shall begin
This fantasy’s soft unfold

They fall together breathlessly
Under magic glimmer glow
Time stops to witness love
They create soft and slow

Her eyes flutter open
She smiles wistfully
And in her heart she safely holds
Her full moon fantasy


~SEA~

© Copyright 2003 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-17 04:33 PM


This definitely gets my vote, as a daughter of the moon, and a believer in fantasy!! Great write, SEA!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

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2 posted 2003-02-17 05:09 PM


Beautiful Susan....gets my vote!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-02-17 05:40 PM


very soft image and hope you share...

I enjoyed

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4 posted 2003-02-17 05:42 PM


None here, do these as well.
You take love poetry, exactly....there.

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5 posted 2003-02-17 06:04 PM


SEA~
A lovely word-walk underneath your full moon~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2003-02-17 07:08 PM


aBSOLUTELY AWSOME!

the Wind is invisible.
        remeber me

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7 posted 2003-02-17 07:20 PM


I love love poems...I love the moon.....I love the sea.....
     definitely!

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(smiles) Oh Susan, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, you always speak of romance so well, may Lady Luna always glitter your life with pixie dust, yay, we all love you so much, this has my vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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9 posted 2003-02-17 11:53 PM


Soft, gentle...it flows....wonderful poem SEA.
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10 posted 2003-02-17 11:56 PM



Susan~
Oh yeah...I absolutely LOVE this.
It's truly beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky

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you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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11 posted 2003-02-18 12:08 PM


SEA,
It could be true, right? Gets my vote!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2003-02-18 12:20 PM


SEA, I've become a secret admirer.Lovely!
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13 posted 2003-02-18 04:23 AM


Sea~ Lovely words.
A winning combination, the Moon and the Sea...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-18-2003 04:24 AM).]

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14 posted 2003-02-18 06:57 AM


I am late, so I can only echo all of the above...

This is your forte'.

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15 posted 2003-02-18 07:15 AM


Such a lovely, gentle flow to compliment these whispers of love, Susan. Very much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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16 posted 2003-02-18 08:32 AM


Walking on crystal moonbeams works for me...
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Our moon is very full...
otherwise the tides of YOU
would not pull so well...


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18 posted 2003-02-18 09:33 AM


Susan, this is lovely. Moonbeams and fantasies, the beauty of life.
Sandra

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19 posted 2003-02-18 11:06 AM


I really like this
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20 posted 2003-02-18 01:45 PM


Wooow.
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21 posted 2003-02-18 04:42 PM


Couldn't quite pinpoint if this is or isn't about a girl with a werewolf fetish.  I'm going to say not though, because it seems pretty serious in tone and nobody else saw that?  Heh, forgive my imagination for taking your images too seriously.  Lovely writing, SEA.

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22 posted 2003-02-18 05:38 PM


Ahh, SEA, very gentle smile. Only you can put romance like this in words. Very well done
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23 posted 2003-02-18 06:22 PM


enjoyed
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24 posted 2003-02-18 06:26 PM


Delightful, full moon fantasy! Two of my favorite things--the moon and love...

Warm hugs,
EA

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25 posted 2003-02-18 06:38 PM


Fantasy in poetry
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26 posted 2003-02-18 07:23 PM


"She walks in crystal moonbeams"

DAMN! How I wish I had thought of that .

beautiful. belongs in  ivanhoe, morte d'artur, tristram and iseult or something just as romantic and fancifull.

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27 posted 2003-02-18 10:15 PM


She walks in crystal moonbeams
where sand meets the sea
feeling her desire build
Lost in rhythmic rhapsody

===============================


I do so love when ya moon us  

Im flying in your flame...rhymes divine Sea girlie...perfect choice.

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ...  it then directs your course."

K.Gibran


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28 posted 2003-02-19 11:43 AM


A precious poem...
Hugs2uDearFriend...
*~coco~*

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I just wanted to tell you all, how much your kind words mean to me. Thank you very much.
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30 posted 2003-02-19 05:03 PM


Soft and smooth... and just beautiful. *S*
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31 posted 2003-02-19 05:07 PM


Heehehe....all us girls know of this.  VERY NICE!!!!

Bridgette

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32 posted 2003-02-19 07:55 PM


The lighter side of SEA...I love it!
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33 posted 2003-02-20 12:57 PM


Is there anyone who writes of love better, nope!
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34 posted 2003-02-20 01:14 AM


Wonderful imagery SEA, enjoyed.

Maree.

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35 posted 2003-02-20 08:56 AM


I enjoyed this .... but it has such a sad twist.... it is all a dream.... will she ever find her moonlight lover?  You write these sooo beautifully.... I can read the longing from your pen.  

Wishing for you the warmth of love returned.

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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36 posted 2003-02-20 03:15 PM


This is really beautiful writing, my friend...

A great choice for Reflections...

regards,
sudhir

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37 posted 2003-02-21 12:01 PM


SEA - your words indeed belong in this book. Click goes my finger...

BC

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38 posted 2003-02-21 02:53 PM


Very Soft. Your words used here inspired some lingering sensual imagery in my mind's eye... I loved every golden drop of it.

-Bob

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39 posted 2003-02-21 04:51 PM


Well, you know I can't resist the pull of the moon.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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40 posted 2003-02-21 11:08 PM


You're not talking about a fetish for mooning are you? lol
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41 posted 2003-02-21 11:33 PM


Hey, wait for me!!! I'm voting! I'm voting!

Good work, SEA

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42 posted 2003-02-22 12:04 PM


A good love poem. Long time no see SEA. still remember me?

~Every girl has a dream within.

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thanks all for the great replies
Raph...could be you never know...lol
Deer....
Vivian, of course I do! How are you sweetie??

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44 posted 2003-02-22 08:48 AM


Beautiful Sea!
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45 posted 2003-02-22 09:01 AM


Nice intriguing poem that combines romance with beautiful natural images.

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Passionate and surprising.  Joyce
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47 posted 2003-02-22 04:43 PM


My Fantasy exactly! How did you know? This is a beautiful poem and surely needs to be in the book. Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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48 posted 2003-02-22 06:34 PM


Sea, this is beautiful and much enjoyed, I wathced your vision through your words, lovely.

Sincerely
Rick

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49 posted 2003-02-22 06:37 PM


Sea, this is beautiful and much enjoyed, I wathced your vision through your words, lovely.

Sincerely
Rick

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50 posted 2003-02-22 07:10 PM


SEA, great write. my vote.

nothing like getting some moonbeams.

Parker

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51 posted 2003-02-22 10:51 PM


This is very touching, Sea. *s

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52 posted 2003-02-23 10:29 AM


oh very nice SEA...!! the images this one conjures in my mind are just fantastic!  

hugs, g

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53 posted 2003-02-23 10:53 AM


How is it that humans can find on a beach
so lovely a story but just beyond reach?
But you can!!  Great story and mood.  Ken J

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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54 posted 2003-02-25 09:05 PM


Breathtakingly beautiful, SEA!
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such a beautiful title and verse
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56 posted 2003-02-28 09:15 PM


Goodness, what a fantasy!   Oh yeah, this one definitely gets my vote.     
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57 posted 2003-03-01 06:26 AM


This is just an awesome romantic write...a and you have my vote
smiles, Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

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58 posted 2003-03-01 08:21 AM


Softly spoken phrases of a dreamer
Beautiful and gentle thoughts
Liz

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59 posted 2003-03-01 11:44 PM


Her eyes flutter open
She smiles wistfully
And in her heart she safely holds
Her full moon fantasy


I love the last strophe.

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60 posted 2003-03-02 11:43 PM


The romantic in me hopes this poem is true. I really love this.
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Worthy of a vote!
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The heart is the best place to keep any sort of fantasy. This is beautiful, Sea.

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63 posted 2003-03-06 03:46 PM


I don't know what could be done to make this one better Sea.  Fine work, you have my vote.

fh

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64 posted 2003-03-07 01:47 AM


What a beautiful walk you've taken us on
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65 posted 2003-03-07 07:42 PM


Sea..I think I just got moonburned.
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66 posted 2003-03-07 09:37 PM


*echos garysgirl* (I had something to say, but she took it... lol)

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67 posted 2003-03-24 02:39 PM


Ahhh...Moon-lit romance! Very nicely written.
(Sigh)

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68 posted 2003-04-04 07:03 PM


Oh SEA ~ This is so lovely ~ so full of so many wonderful images ~ Love this.  Bonnie
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69 posted 2003-04-06 09:24 PM


Susan,

...and you do it again! such beautiful
stunning writing that brings literal
tears to my eyes. Not many people can
do that with poetry. I am so glad that
this made it into the book, and I hope
that you know how truly gifted you are!
take care.
Amy

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it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
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70 posted 2010-11-19 06:01 PM


Ohhhhhhh Myyyyyyy!!!!!!!
Thank you for taking me ... at least in fantasy ...

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With all that gritty sand to contend with in the glowing aftermath :-)

Poet, said my Muse to me, look into thy heart and write.

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