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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Full Moon Fantasy She walks in crystal moonbeams where sand meets the sea feeling her desire build Lost in rhythmic rhapsody His vision fills her mind His touch becomes the midnight air And with the fluttering of angel’s wing Her wish has brought him there As eyes meet and lips collide Passion is uncontrolled It is tonight it shall begin This fantasy’s soft unfold They fall together breathlessly Under magic glimmer glow Time stops to witness love They create soft and slow Her eyes flutter open She smiles wistfully And in her heart she safely holds Her full moon fantasy ~SEA~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This definitely gets my vote, as a daughter of the moon, and a believer in fantasy!! Great write, SEA!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan....gets my vote! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very soft image and hope you share... I enjoyed |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
None here, do these as well. You take love poetry, exactly....there. ~wranx |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ A lovely word-walk underneath your full moon~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
aBSOLUTELY AWSOME! the Wind is invisible. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love love poems...I love the moon.....I love the sea.....   definitely! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, you always speak of romance so well, may Lady Luna always glitter your life with pixie dust, yay, we all love you so much, this has my vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Soft, gentle...it flows....wonderful poem SEA.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Susan~ Oh yeah...I absolutely LOVE this. It's truly beautiful.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, It could be true, right? Gets my vote! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
SEA, I've become a secret admirer.Lovely! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sea~ Lovely words. A winning combination, the Moon and the Sea...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-18-2003 04:24 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am late, so I can only echo all of the above... This is your forte'. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a lovely, gentle flow to compliment these whispers of love, Susan. Very much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Walking on crystal moonbeams works for me... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our moon is very full... otherwise the tides of YOU would not pull so well...  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Susan, this is lovely. Moonbeams and fantasies, the beauty of life. Sandra |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I really like this  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wooow. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Couldn't quite pinpoint if this is or isn't about a girl with a werewolf fetish. I'm going to say not though, because it seems pretty serious in tone and nobody else saw that? Heh, forgive my imagination for taking your images too seriously. Lovely writing, SEA. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, very gentle smile. Only you can put romance like this in words. Very well done |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Delightful, full moon fantasy! Two of my favorite things--the moon and love... Warm hugs, EA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Fantasy in poetry |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
"She walks in crystal moonbeams" DAMN! How I wish I had thought of that  .beautiful. belongs in ivanhoe, morte d'artur, tristram and iseult or something just as romantic and fancifull. -majnu |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She walks in crystal moonbeams where sand meets the sea feeling her desire build Lost in rhythmic rhapsody =============================== I do so love when ya moon us Im flying in your flame...rhymes divine Sea girlie...perfect choice. " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A precious poem... Hugs2uDearFriend... *~coco~* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wanted to tell you all, how much your kind words mean to me. Thank you very much. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Soft and smooth... and just beautiful. *S* |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Heehehe....all us girls know of this. VERY NICE!!!! Bridgette |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The lighter side of SEA...I love it! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Is there anyone who writes of love better, nope! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wonderful imagery SEA, enjoyed. Maree. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed this .... but it has such a sad twist.... it is all a dream.... will she ever find her moonlight lover? You write these sooo beautifully.... I can read the longing from your pen. Wishing for you the warmth of love returned. Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (02-20-2003 08:58 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is really beautiful writing, my friend... A great choice for Reflections... regards, sudhir |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - your words indeed belong in this book. Click goes my finger... BC |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Very Soft. Your words used here inspired some lingering sensual imagery in my mind's eye... I loved every golden drop of it. -Bob |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well, you know I can't resist the pull of the moon. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You're not talking about a fetish for mooning are you? lol |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, wait for me!!! I'm voting! I'm voting! Good work, SEA |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
A good love poem. Long time no see SEA. still remember me? ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks all for the great replies Raph...could be you never know...lolDeer.... Vivian, of course I do! How are you sweetie?? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful Sea! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice intriguing poem that combines romance with beautiful natural images. "If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Passionate and surprising. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
My Fantasy exactly! How did you know? This is a beautiful poem and surely needs to be in the book. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sea, this is beautiful and much enjoyed, I wathced your vision through your words, lovely. Sincerely Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sea, this is beautiful and much enjoyed, I wathced your vision through your words, lovely. Sincerely Rick |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, great write. my vote. nothing like getting some moonbeams. Parker |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is very touching, Sea. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh very nice SEA...!! the images this one conjures in my mind are just fantastic! hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
How is it that humans can find on a beach so lovely a story but just beyond reach? But you can!! Great story and mood. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtakingly beautiful, SEA! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
such a beautiful title and verse M |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Goodness, what a fantasy! Oh yeah, this one definitely gets my vote. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
This is just an awesome romantic write...a  and you have my votesmiles, Cher Poetry is: |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Softly spoken phrases of a dreamer Beautiful and gentle thoughts Liz |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Her eyes flutter open She smiles wistfully And in her heart she safely holds Her full moon fantasy I love the last strophe. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
The romantic in me hopes this poem is true. I really love this. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Worthy of a vote! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The heart is the best place to keep any sort of fantasy. This is beautiful, Sea.  --Liz It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
I don't know what could be done to make this one better Sea. Fine work, you have my vote. fh |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a beautiful walk you've taken us on |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea..I think I just got moonburned. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*echos garysgirl* (I had something to say, but she took it... lol) Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Ahhh...Moon-lit romance! Very nicely written. (Sigh) Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh SEA ~ This is so lovely ~ so full of so many wonderful images ~ Love this. Bonnie |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, ...and you do it again! such beautiful stunning writing that brings literal tears to my eyes. Not many people can do that with poetry. I am so glad that this made it into the book, and I hope that you know how truly gifted you are! take care. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Ohhhhhhh Myyyyyyy!!!!!!! Thank you for taking me ... at least in fantasy ... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
With all that gritty sand to contend with in the glowing aftermath :-) Poet, said my Muse to me, look into thy heart and write. |
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