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Will you remember me - sonnet |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Will you remember me, when I am old Remember all the things I've ever done And tell along the stories you've been told The stories of my life, which have long gone Cause they have worth for someone, I am sure The life I lived, I did not live in vain Go tell them how I loved my roses pure In early mist, with little drops of rain And when I'm gone, don't grieve too much my dear For I was happy in so many ways So keep the humor that I loved to hear Cause with the humor, also laughter stays Though my life has reached almost september I won't be old, 'til I pass december Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Titia, you are loved by so many, dearest friend, and me and so many others will never forget you because of the many hugs and smiles you give to the world! (kiss on cheek) Your loved ones will always think every day of you and be happy for who you are and always being true to yourself, sweet friend, that is why I am putting my vote on this so your children and their children can always read this gorgeous sonnet in the pages of this special book, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll remember you, Titia.. This is wonderful... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The life I lived, I did not live in vain Go tell them how I loved my roses pure In early mist, with little drops of rain" yes, we'll remember |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a lovely vantage to view one's life from Titia ... very much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is wonderfully written, Titia... I loved the effect of the last couplet so much... Regards, Sudhir |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia~ You, my friend, could NEVER be forgotten. I'm loving this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
September or December, I'll remember you. How could I possibly forget? Nice work... I love sonnets when they're done correctly, and this is. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriend~ You KNOW I will remember you~ For always .... in all ways~ Beautifully written, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, dear Titia, I will always remember you, too...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"Though my life has reached almost september I won't be old, 'til I pass december" i really love this miss titia...theres just something about it... hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
I could feel a beautiful soul who's passionate about life here. And this is worth remembering. I love this write alot Titia *hug* angsana |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Titia....I am sure enjoying your poetry today!!! I believe all want to be remembered like this....Wonderful!!!! Bridgette |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tita...what a lovely sonnet and after having met you, I don't believe you'll ever grow old. This one certainly deserves its place in the book |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I will always remember you! Truly!---and for many reasons!--"Let Me Count The Ways"...but alas, I have not the time for such a long project! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Titia, you will see many Septembers before you ever see one December.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Poets don't grow old they just mellow. Lovely Titia. Joyce |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Go tell them how I loved my roses pure In early mist, with little drops of rain ================================== Indeed those roses have inspired lovely things in you Titia...and we love your sincere rhymes!! well done dear poetess of the rose and lamb "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You make me smile longer and wider than anyone I know because your love of life, nature, and people is unequaled by no other. My vote is in! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Titia, if you follow your mom's footsteps, you'll never be old... whatever the season of your life. *S* But you will certainly be remembered... with lots of love. *S* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Titia--I haven't met you, but through words, and you are most memorably lovely! kuffles! (hope I spelled that right) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now who could ever forget you Titia? We will always remember you... and you're not going anywhere for a long long time. ~hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I'm sure you will be remembered lovely write. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I join with many voices the wish for many Septembers for you. Very nice write.. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How I could I forget such lovely poetry! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Words like these are hard to forget. J There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Surprisingly my second entry took over the first, well, it's your choice and I thank you all for those lovely replies. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very beautiful and correct write, I am only just getting to know you through your poems.And already I know I'd miss you. Jason |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Jason, welcome to the crowd and thank you so much for your lovely words. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - never will we grow old. We just become more mature... My vote... BC |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
"Will you remember me, when I am old" I empathize with this line, going that way too. My vote on this one, Titia. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Titia, you are hard to forget hugsss M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Titia, my friend, I will always remember you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Titia, how could I forget you, unless I have Alzheimers in which case I won't remember me. This is a definite contender. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Titia~ You and your words will always be a part of Passions and have a special place in our hearts dear lady. Loved your sonnet...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (03-01-2003 08:22 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Bill, LOL I think I'll never will be a grownup jjote, thanks, but isn't everybody? Maureen, I'll never forget the closetlady too you know. I liked our pool swimmings. Sue, likewise, hope you are doing well. Keth, LOL even if I get Altzheimer I still will know that Aussi gall, who took care of me so extremely well Paul, you make me blush Thank you guys, I will remember all of you till the end of days. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm still remembering you, sweet friend.. "Love makes the world go around" |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
We'll all remember you, Titia. Well done! I liked this. Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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