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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
 Feel this way, the magic the moment, hearts and breath two into one, ensconced into moments of prism whispers, sweet sweat beading upon brow. Eyes radiate gentle caresses, placed upon enchanted touch. Lay claim to a virtuoso, spirits sing throughout as never heard before, together united love becomes a simple picture...of us. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful poem and the picture is a classic! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Dennis...a thumbs-up to you.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Dennis, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, your poetry is always such a loving symphony of heart and soul, this is a grand opus for the new book, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2003 01:49 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A sweet, simple message. Very nicely written, dhicks. I especially enjoyed your concise, closely-knit descriptions. They kept a very fresh and detailed image in my head despite the lack of detail given to each little detail... if you know what I mean...  Also, the ending couldn't be better. I'd like to see this in Reflections. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
very good, the picture is nice too |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A simple picture of a very intricate theme... I like it...  |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all for your warm comments. One of my happier pieces.Thank you all again. Dennis |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Simply beautiful! A love poem as old as time and unique as well. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is lovely. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Let there be romance! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely... regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Enjoyed the read Charisma |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is so lovely! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Lay claim to a virtuoso, spirits sing throughout as never heard before, together united love becomes a simple picture...of us" I really enjoyed this.. you knew how to suck me in, mention music and I'm here!! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Simply beautiful, Dennis. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Dennis, this is quite beautiful |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I'm so impressed with your writing. Voted. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful picture and words to match - delightful. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi dhicks, Wonderful imagery in this with the beautiful picture, enjoyed. Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done. The poem speaks so well of unity and blessing. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dennis, I've enjoyed all your poetry, and this one is especially beautiful Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
*Bump* |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Prism whispers!!! That's one I won't forget! Very well written and you have my vote! Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Proud to vote for this. Joyce |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness Dennis - this IS a concerto . . . I love this! xxoo |
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