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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Imagine there’s a love inside that no one’s ever seen Just hidden in a little place where no-one’s ever been Imagine true desires all just hidden not too far All whispering in secret and unhappy where they are Imagine fate has taken you to places that are wrong Mistaking you for someone else to life you don’t belong Imagine someone’s waiting for the person you should be Who’s lost among the lonely hearts, just searching to be free Imagine there are truly days where happiness does live Where all the love you have inside another one can give Imagine world of second chance and place to give your best Surely that is land of dream and where my head does rest |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
In only three stanzas you have elegantly, poetically and convincingly painted a picture of hope for those who have yet to find true love. It's inspirational and a joy to read. My vote is in! Patrick Talty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This lovely write is so right! You have written so many meaningful lines that I want to go back now and reread them again! Love & Light, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-18-2003 12:47 PM).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Patrick, the reward for my poem is the wonderful comments you have given in your reply, thank you very much, always nice to hear from you and read your response. Dear Linda, also to you my friend, thank you for the wonderful comments, they are so much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It seems so much is left to chance. I wrote one on this subject which I called "Wrong Side of the Street" It's somewhere in my files. Joyce |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Joyce, thanks for the reply, life seems to be made up on chance, the lucky find love and the destiny of happiness, others live on hope. Sincerely Rick |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I must conclude that you are a very sensitive soul. Once again a well-penned piece. Voted. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
SPIRIT, thanks for the reply, all I do is speak from the heart, I look back on much of my poetry and sometimes wonder. Your comments are always appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definitely from the heart [This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-19-2003 02:46 PM).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
passing shadows, thank you for the reply here, all my words come from the heart, its release is my poetry, great you can find the time to read and reply. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love a man with heart! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
passing shadows, and I a woman of honesty, thanks for your reply, great to read you again. Sincerely Rick |
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