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Rick
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0 posted 2003-04-18 09:48 AM



Imagine there’s a love inside that no one’s ever seen
Just hidden in a little place where no-one’s ever been
Imagine true desires all just hidden not too far
All whispering in secret and unhappy where they are

Imagine fate has taken you to places that are wrong
Mistaking you for someone else to life you don’t belong
Imagine someone’s waiting for the person you should be
Who’s lost among the lonely hearts, just searching to be free

Imagine there are truly days where happiness does live
Where all the love you have inside another one can give
Imagine world of second chance and place to give your best
Surely that is land of dream and where my head does rest

© Copyright 2003 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
pjtalty
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1 posted 2003-04-18 10:19 AM


In only three stanzas you have elegantly, poetically and convincingly painted a picture of hope for those who have yet to find true love. It's inspirational and a joy to read. My vote is in!

Patrick Talty

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-18 12:46 PM


This lovely write is so right! You have written so many meaningful lines that I want to go back now and reread them again!

Love & Light,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-18-2003 12:47 PM).]

Rick
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3 posted 2003-04-18 09:12 PM


Patrick, the reward for my poem is the wonderful comments you have given in your reply, thank you very much, always nice to hear from you and read your response.

Dear Linda, also to you my friend, thank you for the wonderful comments, they are so much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

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4 posted 2003-04-19 02:20 AM


It seems so much is left to chance.  I wrote one on this subject which I called "Wrong Side of the Street"  It's somewhere in my files.  Joyce
Rick
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5 posted 2003-04-19 07:04 AM


Joyce, thanks for the reply, life seems to be made up on chance, the lucky find love and the destiny of happiness, others live on hope.

Sincerely
Rick

SPIRIT
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6 posted 2003-04-19 08:33 AM


I must conclude that you are a very sensitive soul. Once again a well-penned piece. Voted.
Rick
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7 posted 2003-04-19 08:38 AM


SPIRIT, thanks for the reply, all I do is speak from the heart, I look back on much of my poetry and sometimes wonder.
Your comments are always appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-04-19 02:45 PM


definitely from the heart

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-19-2003 02:46 PM).]

Rick
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9 posted 2003-04-20 01:29 AM


passing shadows, thank you for the reply here, all my words come from the heart, its release is my poetry, great you can find the time to read and reply.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-04-23 02:23 PM


I love a man with heart!
Rick
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11 posted 2003-04-24 08:44 AM


passing shadows, and I a woman of honesty, thanks for your reply, great to read you again.

Sincerely
Rick

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