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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
The heart is a mosaic Made up of colorful tiles It is composed of a set Of many different styles Each tile was set by someone Who came and touched your heart Either for good or for bad, They added to the work of art. Some have laid down many, Helping you in many ways, Working to make your heart Worthy of the highest praise! Some have come and set just one— Just one magnificent tile Caring enough to take time To share with you a smile And sadly, some have laid down Tiles that are chipped and ugly Leaving others to fix your heart As well as it can be So today you have a chance On life to make an impact: Each tile remains forever- One for every caring act [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (04-10-2003 08:23 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A unique way of describing the affect of others on your life. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Interesting way of looking at impressions left by others on our hearts. Maybe somewhat late for a book submission but I voted and maybe... hopefully... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, on the grand design of the collage of life, we all have so many comrades to paste to the masterpiece! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Thank you for your votes. I already have one poem in the book, so I don't mind if this one doesn't make it in, but I decided to give it a try. ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem is WONDERFUL!---in form and content!  Warm hugs, EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Benjamin, I love this....the thoughts, the rhyme....just all of it. I've giving it my vote, as well as a place in my library.  "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-11-2003 10:23 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I forgot to click the keeper box.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... beautiful perspective! *S* |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is nice and unique....but, makes me a little sad!!!  I very much liked the poem.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
And sadly, some have laid down Tiles that are chipped and ugly Leaving others to fix your heart As well as it can be theese lines really impressed me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
got my vote! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
My heart is now a mosaic... thanks Lynda |
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