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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Onto the night sky, we four ride, On our horses of fire and pain, The curse will fall like an angry tide Onto the human's astral plain Suffering is what we bring, For our goal is the end, It matters not if you are peasant or king, You'll all fall to evil's friend Famine, will bleed you dry, Fields empty forever and more, No food for you, thus you may die, As he stalks the killing floor Pestillence, a plague he passes Unto the beings of this place, The putrifying skin of the masses, A sign of the weakness of the human race War, eternal suffering to all, By blade, club, fist and gun, Maniacs screaming at war's call, And the end has finally begun Death, deliverance final Is the fear you face on his path, Of sins, you'll all be in denial, Cold and terminal shall be his wrath We are the four warriors of might, Unstoppable, you'll all die, It is futile for you to fight, So surrender your soul and prepare to fly The time has come for your arrogant ways, So our force you'll feel, Our weapons bring death, skin flays, And into darkness you all reel... [This message has been edited by Peter J Marcroft (03-30-2003 04:53 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
The four horseman ride! I love it........but you forgot to click so that I could vote. Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (03-30-2003 05:13 AM).] |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
**Slaps head*** now that was a juvenile error!! Thank you for reading and I am glad that you enjoyed it |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Peter, Whoa! Powerful. Scary. Surrender your soul, indeed! Hopefully it is not too late, for anyone inclined to find and honor God. Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Maybe they'll pass over and miss me? Shiver. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I remember being a child and being told a story of the four riders, and being scared by nightmares for months LOL, but I will give you a vote anyway even if I do get nightmares. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
*lol* thank you very much |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent write!! (shivers as she types *G*) |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Wow,Peter...very powerful writing!I see you have been reading Revelation,Chapter 6:1-8, to be exact.Makes me wonder if they will ride soon.I hope that while I am still alive, they stay in the stable! Whew! Vote! Peace On Earth,Street Heart If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Thank you very much for the feedback peole glad you enjoyed it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Glad to see you repost this fine piece of writing and have submitted it for Reflections. Love & Light, EA |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
thanks alot EA, I thought this kind of piece would be nice in the reflections of life theme. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Peter, yes, the Apocalypse, I too was terrified and cried for days when I first was told about this by my Grandpa and now I turn to the Lord so I can seek pentitence and understand the meaning of Love in entirety! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is powerfully eerie, we al love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peter, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Thank you very much for the feedback |
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