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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Melt Away It doesn't matter it's raining Or the sun is shining. The smell of you is so warm That my whole body collapse In front of you... (right there beside you) It doesn't matter I'm hungry Or my belly rises like a balloon. The taste of you is so gentle That I feel like it's a cushion To my distress... (ease my belly) I don't want a day without you. You are water to my instinct. My lip slowly touches you. You warmly welcome me Sitting on my tongue. Each drop of your fine Gentleness echoes within me. You inspire my thoughts As I spill them on ink, As though I'm sharing... part of you. Author Note: A cup of coffee, a piece of me. (c)Mar 14, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
Oh my Gosh... This poem was one of the best love poems i have ever read.... I feel the same way about My boyfriend Anthony, This really touched me... I hope you always feel this way towards your loved one... Hope to hear more of your poems.... :'( (Cries) :'( Ashgiel |
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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
OOPS FORGOT TO VOTE.... HERE YA GO!!!!!!!!!! ( CLICK ) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I thought this was a beautiful love poem and then you deflate this idea It is a cup of coffee? I read it again. Yes, it could be a cup of coffee. Loved it just the same. Love, Joyuce |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and when someones heart melts away by words of love, nothing is ever gone, in fact it is all there and you are more free than you can imagine! (sigh) This is gorgeous, you have my vote, much enjoyed this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eliza, I simply love this. I was going to write what a delightfully different love poem this was....then I read your note that it's about a cup of coffee. LOL Voting...  (But, now, I do feel this way about my Love, too!! LOL)  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-30-2003 01:17 PM).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This gets my vote if for nothing more than its uniqueness and double meaning, not to mention the fact I loved the write   |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah I feel the same way about Ice Cream:P If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love the double meaning here, written so cleverly. enjoyed. You have my vote. Maree  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I too had to go back and read your love poem again after your footnote at the end and I think also that either way this poem is read that it remains a most romantic love poem be it about a love for coffee or a love for that special someone. Heart warming and delicious. Good job. -Bob |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful writing, Eliza! You have my vote too! All writing comes |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Spilling coffee onto paper..I can relate to that! This is so sweet! Unless you take it black, but sweet anyway! |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
Very versatile piece. Well written and works well for both sippers and soul mates. Liked it and got my vote. Patrick Talty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loved the double entendre! It doubled my pleasure! Love & Light, EA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Ah I Melt for Coffee too..... enjoyed it very much  Charisma |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
Capuccino for mine, . NiceGod bless and keep you, Namaste! |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I feel the same way 'bout my coffee a_l_p ~ love the way this is written! Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice.. hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
very nice indeed! and sure it was about a cup of coffee lol j/k you got my vote! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How very delightful! I hope it makes it. God bless our soldiers, for it is now |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Fascinating write ... I enjoyed it. Hugs for Peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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