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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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Broken Angel, hidden in disguise Filling the world with petty lies Hurting everyone you come upon, So much better if you were gone Hey Broken Angel, why don't you go You're not welcome here, don't you know? Run away from here, be on your way Broken Angel, no one wants you to stay Ride, ride away into the fading sunset Ride until eternity you have met Keep looking forward, gray eyes ahead Broken Angel, you're gonna wind up dead Take your crooked halo and then run Broken Angel, your misdeeds won't be undone You ended up here when you fell from the sky And now, each night, to the heavens you cry But Broken Angel, this isn't where you belong So stop burdening us with your sad, sad song Broken Angel, leave this life behind real fast How long did you think the nightmare would last? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one is intense. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From your photo, you ARE an angel, so this "Broken Angel" cannot possibly be about you!... Peace, Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Pilgrimage, Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Earth Angel, Thank you, sweetie. No, it isn't about me. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Wow...how depressing, yet so intense. What inspired this, if you don't mind my asking?  ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
There are many broken angels here..... Perfect submission for the book!!!! Enjoyed!!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Liz, Honestly, one of my sister's tee shirts combined with some things that were going on in my life with various people inspired me on this one...but mostly my sister's shirt. Justbleu, Thanks! Glad you liked it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Susan, this is so very heartaching but true, sweet friend, I too was broken this way until I turned to Him and now find much more solace in a troubled world! (sigh) You truly are an angel that keeps shining with hope and compassion through the grey, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh I'm so glad it's just your sister's shirt. Joyce |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I hope your angel is in repair and I love your picture *s ~A~ a very pretty Angel, you are ~A~ |
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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S |
u have my vote , a very nice write |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Noah Eaton, I have to admit I peeked in to see if you left me a message and I'm so glad you did. You always know the right words to keep a smile on my face. Thanks, sweetie. Joyce, (smiles) Me too, I suppose. Always am a little embarassed when people ask me about the inspiration for this. Sometimes things like this just come to you, you know? ~A~, Aww, how sweet of you. Thank you much. MissKlarmic, I'm so happy that you liked it. Thanks! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Wow - there is som real animosity in this. I hope you haven't been the object of this person's venom. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
LngJhn, Nope, not at all. Completely fictional . |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Angel~ Very powerful write. Glad this was fictional...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Agnst always deserves a place in the book. You've got my vote! Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Paul and JP, Thank you both very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
the title is what caught my eye, but after the first stanza, i couldnt stop reading! exceptional writing, a MUST for the book! you got my vote. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Interesting write, very vote worthy. |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Very powerful poem. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed the read.... but feel sorry for the poor broken Angel... Neeraja |
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