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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
As we walk along the sands of time, the waves washing at our feet Looking into the calm blue skies, reflections we will meet the world around us in the waves swirling ‘round our feet time passes as we walk, as we talk, of all things said and done and all things still to do I walk the warm sands of time with all, yet just with you you’re the only one I see, the only one I need the only one I can be with, you’re the one for me why is it only you can satisfy my need for love, for friendship, for everything in life never once have you made me angry, never was there strife we seem perfect for each other soul mates for life So as we stroll along these eternal sands I just have one question for you forever will I love you, but will you love me to or is this the end of two true friends who have come so far now to end Because here we are in this ocean adrift between us and humanity, lies a great rift as we gaze into the skies we drift away forever sailing, love leading the way the night eternal, as are we together, here, adrift in the sea the sea of stars swirling round pictures, memories, feelings abound were here with others like ourselves who care for their friends more than life itself we would give our lives, to save the other from harm the stars swirl round, and we're in each others arms gazing into your soulful eyes, wonder, innocence, never a lie between us, against us, no one can stand as we gaze into the stars, and play in the sand the sands of time and the sea of stars forever they're everyones, together they're ours reaching out to touch the sky we no longer wonder, we know we can fly were here forever now, no way to part so, my love, i give you my heart may our paths last forever, and never be far from this place here, this sea of stars the sands of time the sea of stars forever they’re everyones together they’re ours Better title needed, help with that is appreciated |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rob, this is a very beautiful poem, though kind of sad. And I think the title is fine, personally. A good book submission.  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-28-2003 09:38 AM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cool....I get to vote for this!!!! Good choice for the book!!!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Chelsea Junior Member
since 2003-03-28
Posts 10Oregon, USA |
Seems like you feel very intensly...I admire that..I love the poem! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I love this wonderful declaration of love, sweet friend, one title idea that came through my mind reading this was "Swimming In A Sea Of Stars" but I believe the title should always come from the authors own heart and I love your original title, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rob, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed the walk along your "Sands of Time"...very moving... Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
Hey, i love the poem. my title would be Standing in the sand of time, Looking to the sea of stars. but still everything was just flowing and great, and an exelent submission for the book Shayne |
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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S |
i dont think ive ever read anything quite so beautiful. |
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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S |
really tho ..lol sorry but i came acrossed it again it is an amazing work of art such a fantastic poem ah ive never read anything ive loved quite so much. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump.... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump.... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
 Thanks all. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful beautiful writing!! this was such a lovely piece, though sort of sad. it still made me smile nonetheless. i like the title you picked though maybe eternal sands of time would be better. just my opinion though. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is really good.... Bump |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump.... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
I Loved It |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
the sands of time the sea of stars forever they’re everyones together they’re ours i loved your closeing has good thoughts,, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Lovely! A very beautiful poem. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I am adding this poem to my library... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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