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My Dear oh Pongo |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
My dear oh pongo, Why did you have to go? I remember when I first seen you. All I said was, 'Hello' I wish you were here. Here with me. Oh how I miss, Playing by that tree. Me and you, Would run around And play ball. But now, I'm just down. I will never see you again. Oh but how I loved you. And ill never see you. Now, I have the blues. You went because, My other dog Went out, If the fog. He couldn't see And he bit some foe But now I know. He didn't know. My pongo had to go Even if he didn't want to. Ill never forget you pongo, And I will always love you. Its now time, To stop these words. Before I go too far. And tell you bout my bird. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Chris, I'm so sorry about your loss, dearest friend, I know how it feels because when I was a little boy, around 8 years old, I had two kittens named Suky and Holly, and I love them so much but one day my Suky ran away and Holly passed away of a flu! (wipes tears) It still takes out so much in me thinking of their purrs and meows though I know they will always be purring from the heavens down on me! (sad sigh) My dearest sympathies to your missing of Pongo, sweet friend, I send angel hugs out to you, this is a very heartfelt and sincere expression from your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sorry about that loss, a dog's company is much better than that of many men, I find. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Dogs are a mans best friend... too bad I dislike dogs. Lol good poem though I really liked it. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Words from the heart.  Charisma |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a spunky little poem -- I like this! You can be the bounce-back-man of poetry! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This made me laugh and cry at once. In other words, I reacted to your words, which is a good sign that you did a good job in presenting your tale. Or was that Pongo's tail? LOL, never mind, I'm voting for it. Who could turn down a good Pongo read, a story about a boy's best friend? Now if you'd go fix a typo or two...unless they were intentional, to make it sound like it was from a little boy? hint: saw, not seen in, not (if)the fog |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Heart felt, I understand having lost a member of my family of canines. Dog lovers can relate to this honest pen. SG |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Wow,very good poem, losing an animal is hard... But really good poem! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Cute write but the spelling does take away from it (eg:ill instead of I'll) and surely little pongo deserves to be Pongo. I'm voting anyway. What you post here is your autograph, sign with pride. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I'm very much a dog lover so I voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I'm so sorry for your loss--but you did manage to also make me laugh!--Yes, please do tell us about your bird! lol Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Losing a pet is like losing your best friend....I love your tribute to your "PONGO" I bet he was a great pal!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
BUMP..... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump..... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump.... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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