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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The poet’s heart beats strong with love Exuding mercy given from heaven above Each pulse sends out a signal true Meant to capture the love of you The poet’s heart is filled with compassion Its tenderness never goes out of fashion Always there with a listening ear To soothe your anxiety and lessen your fear The poet’s heart yearns for acceptance A soul in search of man’s repentance Capturing the essence of daily life Helping you cope with trials and strife The poet’s heart flows through her pen Allowing us to believe once again In a world so honest and pure She gives you the courage to endure The poet’s heart shines like the sun You think about her when your day is done Wondering what she’ll write that night Casting on your path the warmest light The poet’s heart is a fragile thing But with patience you can make it sing Songs filled with ancient lore Of all those who have gone before The poet’s heart feels your pain She knows when inside it starts to rain Drying your tears with her gentle hand Always showing she understands The poet’s heart shall live on Even after her life is gone For it is breathes through each word Every one your heart has heard The poet’s heart drifts on by Leaving a tear in my eye I’d give anything to see The poet’s heart live in me All writing comes |
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rodger_jr Junior Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 37Glen Hope, PA |
I have the honor of knowing a poets heart well....nicely written |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done. I really enjoyed the read.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice!!!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And no doubt about it you have the poet's heart. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice...and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really enjoyed this poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, the poetic soul lives deep in everyone, it is just how we use it that matters, and never take for granted the beauty we give all of life that even when a poet passes on, her smile is as bright as the embers of the fire and lustrous as the grass! (big hugggsssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, you have my poetic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well, Hey there stranger, been awhile since we have spoken, I have missed you, we really need to catch up! LOL Jen, you are a truly gifted poet, and the last verse in this poems proves it. "The poet’s heart drifts on by Leaving a tear in my eye I’d give anything to see The poet’s heart live in me" If that isn't pure poetry I don't know what is! Love Ya Sis! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I think that just about covers all the angles of a poet's heart. Lovely, simply lovely, Lone Wolf. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
The poet’s heart drifts on by Leaving a tear in my eye I’d give anything to see The poet’s heart live in me Obviously the poet's heart is beating strong and true inside of you dear Lone Wolf. I really enjoyed this write and am happy to show my own loving poetic heart by voting for it. Good luck. Write on.. Tammy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
came back to revote for this gem of pen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the poetic heart of you beats clearly in this Lone Wolf yes, 'tis poetry within that glows without |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed it very much Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
good work with this one. . . so, I'll vote for it again. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I’d give anything to see The poet’s heart live in me" beautiful lines... nicely done |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
From what I have seen of your writing here in this poem I would have to say that there is a poetic heart dwelling within you. I loved how you described the poetic spirit in this poem, it was so right on target.  Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Voting once more for the poets heart!!! Again, a perfect poem for the anthology I believe. -Bob |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
quote: it does....very touching write hon.....hugsssss you.... Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Simply Beautiful Maree. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (03-25-2003 06:21 AM).] |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
" Meant to capture the love of you " your poem is very good. Good luck!! mysticpoe |
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