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Learninginlife New Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 9Mississippi |
It all starts with a simple word Open That is what she said to me that day Open It repeats in my mind and words began to relate Reveal That is what she is asking of me Expose Her requirements are easy enough Uncover My true feelings hidden deep inside Clear That is the message she wants Why must I struggle then to give her what she needs? Fear Yes I know this enough Hurt I have felt that painful touch Trust This I lack no doubt in my mind Concern This all reminds me of the past how long can love truly last I must give an answer to her it is only fare Faith This I have within myself, maybe enough to share Hope Don’t we all wish and toss our coins in the well Joy Even in bad times I can remember times of laughter that we felt together Time We have such short lives why would I want to waste it worrying Open This is an easy enough word Open Yes I think I know what must be said I Open My Heart To You And with this everything I am I reveal No Fear some Hurt all my Trust I am an open book to be read by you You alone I Open too. |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
I like the format you used...with the single words every other line. Beautiful. Blessed Be Thee, Stephanie Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There are so many that open themselves up for all to see, and sometimes I think that is really dangerous, but that is just me.  I Wish You The Luck Of The Irish! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-17-2003 04:46 PM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
How interestingly written this is - gets my vote. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done, enjoyed the formatting and the read of this.  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'll vote for this interesting posting. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent presentation..much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is an interesting poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I like your style. Nice work!  All writing comes |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I agree with Lone Wolf...I like your style and this poem touched me. The format was very original. *s I like reading open books  is there any other way? |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
nice write cool format |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Unique. Yes, that's the word. Luv it. When you think you have heard it all, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Life - Welcome to PIP! - sorry I got here late - this is quite amazing - good luck xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Different... and I love it! Voting! Maree |
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