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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Timeless is the wind When it blows north, east, south or west Boundless is the sky Even when she's been cloudly dressed Her beams of love and light Will sooth your restless soul When she reaches out to you Gentle light beams within console Timeless is your voice Along with stream of wind Struggling anguish within Darken bittersweet mind Threshold of the night Don't lock the inner whole Among your shadows of sighs I'll comfort your tortured soul Don't be afraid to walk Don't ask the reason why 'Cause timeless is the wind And time is passing by Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more Twined with timeless borders Footprints across the shore Two pair side by side There were you walked alone Someone holding you tight Seems your guardian angel Wraps you with wings so light Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more And timeless is the wind Along borders of love Unbounded as the sky When time passes by |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Charisma, what an amazing and wonderful poem. Bravo girl! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Yours is the first poem of the morning that I am reading and it's molding the start of my day with a smile and warmth. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Charisma; How this poem flows and captures the timeless truth of unconditional love. Your use of nature enhances the beauty of your lovely words. Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This kind of poetry is truly "Timeless". It made me sigh with its whisperings of love and nature. Simply beautiful... Warm morning hugs, Earth Angel P.S. Your photo is absolutely adorable. Looks like you are a true "flower child"! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Goodbye is not forever Forever is no more Twined with timeless borders Footprints across the shore"  I like the way you offered us this piece of timeless truth.And in case I never mentioned it before, I really like that picture of you! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, especially "Good bye is not forever". I hope that it's true. Hugs Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Timeless is your voice Along with stream of wind Struggling anguish within Darken bittersweet mind Threshold of the night Don't lock the inner whole Among your shadows of sighs I'll comfort your tortured soul' A write of support and sincerity. Liked this a lot Charisma! Especially the verse I quoted. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
this is a very beautiful poem for book submission.....   Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Charisma, this is sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too just love your picture as we are all flower children and you have a golden heart of a flower! (kiss on cheek) May the winds of love always sing to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-23-2003 01:57 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...simply beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I just loved it. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Charisma! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wonderful.....I just love this!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma, my friend, I just LOVE reading your poetry. This is so softly and beautifully penned. Wonderfully done.  Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Timeless" is your lovely poem, Charisma... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Timeless...you've got the title right for this poem is |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Timeless is the wind When it blows north, east, south or west Boundless is the sky Even when she's been cloudly dressed Her beams of love and light Will sooth your restless soul When she reaches out to you Gentle light beams within console Timeless is your voice Along with stream of wind Struggling anguish within Darken bittersweet mind Threshold of the night Don't lock the inner whole Among your shadows of sighs I'll comfort your tortured soul ================================== Such pretty poetic ponderings... a lovely write of spirit and heart poetess Charisma!! oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yes, Charisma, this is VERY good...voting!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A real keepsake this poem is dearPoetFriend Charisma... Hugs2u... *~coco~* |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very vote worthy. Joyce |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful poem! A vote for poetic pleasure Liz |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
My vote for this, too. It reads like one is singing a love song..hummmm. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
How wonderfully you captured the timeless quality of love and life, my friend!! A definite front-runner for our book! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Charisma, I love this, and is indeed timeless. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
My sincere thanks for everyone and all for reading and for your kind comments on my poem......  love you´allCharisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Charisma - what can I say about a beautiful writer of these words. My vote is cast... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
good bye is not forever...*s enjoyed the feelings expressed M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Charisma - catching up here, and after reading your poem I don't think you could have picked a more appropriate title for it. It was beautiful! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Some day, some day, I will be able to write this subject as well as you do. Maybe. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump...... |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Charming! Gets my vote. |
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