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Angel of Love |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
My world was in darkness, And you were my light. Nightmares to the left, You to the right. Just when it seemed Life couldn't be better, You sent me your first E-mail letter. The love you gave me Became my power. You gave me hope, Even in my darkest hour. When it all seemed so lost, All out of control, You came into my life And your love saved my soul. You gave me the strength To win any fight; So much love from an angel Increases my might. So when evil comes To cause you harm, With a sword in my hand And a shield on my arm, I'll stand and face Hell, Stand against their dark art, And defeat them all With the strength of my heart. They'll never know mercy, They'll only know pain! But they'll never be able To hurt my angel again. If I have to stand, And surrender it all, I'll rise up against them When I hear you call. So far from my heart, You're so far away, But you steal my heart a thousand times With each passing day. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! You go boy! Oh Liam, to be there for someone is the most wonderful thing in love and I know she will forever be humbled by your mighty iron mail of courage you offer her! (big hugggsssssss) This is mighty, sweet friend, I love the deliverance here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks for the praises. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
The last two lines are cute. Another sweet poem... Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Perfect for Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
awwwwwwwwww |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this... |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks everyone. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely sentiments of love, Thundermage ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Lovely |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Another good poem, Liam... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ohhh my a poet after my own heart....this is soooo wonderful I LOVED IT!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Liam dear, this is exceptional work!!! and you have my checkmark.... I like your rendition of the knight in shining armour... it is an old allusion but it still works where hearts in love are concerned. I kinda know who this is for and she is a very lucky lady. I think I'll add this gem to my library as well while I'm here. Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (02-20-2003 02:14 AM).] |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Very Very Wonderful! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely! Lovely!! Lovely!!! My vote is cast. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This must have gotten Julie's heart, as well as her wings, a flutterin'! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lucky angel with you in her corner. Joyce |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I'm luckier to have her in my life. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done..much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think this came from a deep place of love for someone you truly care about, and it read with such honesty. What a lovely poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Truly beautiful writing! You got my vote. All writing comes |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dedication of Love. She has a knight in shining armor in you...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Beautiful poem. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Just what we all need. A heroic figure to protect us. Joyce |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
You got one here. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Just a little bump up. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was such a loving and delightful write! i really felt the love and conviction in this poem! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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