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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2003-02-15 12:11 PM


My world was in darkness,
And you were my light.
Nightmares to the left,
You to the right.
Just when it seemed
Life couldn't be better,
You sent me your first
E-mail letter.
The love you gave me
Became my power.
You gave me hope,
Even in my darkest hour.
When it all seemed so lost,
All out of control,
You came into my life
And your love saved my soul.
You gave me the strength
To win any fight;
So much love from an angel
Increases my might.
So when evil comes
To cause you harm,
With a sword in my hand
And a shield on my arm,
I'll stand and face Hell,
Stand against their dark art,
And defeat them all
With the strength of my heart.
They'll never know mercy,
They'll only know pain!
But they'll never be able
To hurt my angel again.
If I have to stand,
And surrender it all,
I'll rise up against them
When I hear you call.
So far from my heart,
You're so far away,
But you steal my heart a thousand times
With each passing day.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

© Copyright 2003 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-15 01:20 AM




BRAVO!!! You go boy! Oh Liam, to be there for someone is the most wonderful thing in love and I know she will forever be humbled by your mighty iron mail of courage you offer her! (big hugggsssssss) This is mighty, sweet friend, I love the deliverance here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
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2 posted 2003-02-15 01:33 AM


Thanks for the praises.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Local Parasite
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3 posted 2003-02-15 12:35 PM


The last two lines are cute.  Another sweet poem...

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

ThunderMage
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4 posted 2003-02-15 01:45 PM


Perfect for Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

GOlDsparklESS
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5 posted 2003-02-17 07:56 PM


awwwwwwwwww
garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-02-17 08:09 PM


I love this...
ThunderMage
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7 posted 2003-02-17 08:10 PM


Thanks everyone.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2003-02-18 06:28 AM


Lovely sentiments of love, Thundermage ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kellie_Cantrell
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9 posted 2003-02-19 12:48 PM


Lovely
El_Campeador
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10 posted 2003-02-19 09:16 AM


Another good poem, Liam...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Justbleu
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11 posted 2003-02-20 01:57 AM


Ohhh my a poet after my own heart....this is soooo wonderful I LOVED IT!!!  

Bridgette  

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Magicmystery
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12 posted 2003-02-20 02:12 AM


Liam dear, this is exceptional work!!! and you have my checkmark.... I like your rendition of the knight in shining armour... it is an old allusion but it still works where hearts in love are concerned.  I kinda know who this is for and she is a very lucky lady.  I think I'll add this gem to my library as well while I'm here.  

Sherry


Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (02-20-2003 02:14 AM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
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13 posted 2003-03-02 01:05 PM


Very Very Wonderful!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

SPIRIT
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14 posted 2003-03-17 05:20 PM


Lovely! Lovely!! Lovely!!!
My vote is cast.

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-03-17 05:51 PM


This must have gotten Julie's heart, as well as her wings, a flutterin'!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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16 posted 2003-03-17 06:35 PM


Lucky angel with you in her corner.  Joyce
ThunderMage
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17 posted 2003-03-17 06:37 PM


I'm luckier to have her in my life.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
18 posted 2003-03-17 07:49 PM


Very very nicely done..much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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19 posted 2003-03-18 02:01 PM


I think this came from a deep place of love for someone you truly care about, and it read with such honesty.  What a lovely poem.

  
Sharon

Lone Wolf
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20 posted 2003-03-18 08:07 PM


Truly beautiful writing!  You got my vote.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Paul Wilson
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21 posted 2003-03-31 12:28 PM


Dedication of Love. She has a knight in shining armor in you...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Lost Dreamer
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22 posted 2003-04-03 12:59 PM


Beautiful poem.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



Joyce Johnson
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23 posted 2003-04-03 01:45 PM


Just what we all need.  A heroic figure to protect us.  Joyce
ThunderMage
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24 posted 2003-04-03 02:22 PM


You got one here.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

SPIRIT
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25 posted 2003-04-09 10:14 AM


Just a little bump up.
Aimster
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26 posted 2003-04-09 06:53 PM


this was such a loving and delightful
write! i really felt the love and
conviction in this poem! take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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