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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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How long has it been that I have loved you Longer than the days we have touched... In my heart you took root like a seed in the earth In the depths of me you grew strong and bold... My need for you fell desperate at times My quest to find you was fervent... Loving you took courage-- But I took faith Believing you to one day stand before me... You came to me in a quiet romance Slowly seeping into my pores Loving me gently, guiding me into you... I've loved you forever Even before the first time my smile met yours Before the time I stayed just to be near you Way before I shivered beneath your Angel touch... I've loved you forever Long before I knew it was you-- It was you... Now I know how it feels to be loved Completely... -dgvarner 2-16-03 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this is complete with so many lovely sentiments, I love it! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'How long has it been that I have loved you Longer than the days we have touched...' Excellent write...and choice.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yes, that feeling of that ONE always with you throughout time!!! I can relate to this!!!! Wonderful piece!!!! Bridgette  |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I've loved you forever Long before I knew it was you-- It was you..." yes this is so perfect |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh..I want to feel this way!!! Good poem!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, you've gotta know that I LOVE this. Made me smile inside and out. Good to see something new from you. Love ya,  ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh boy I agree with Sharon, I too want to feel this way. This was an awesome write, enjoyed very much. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah beautiful penned....enjoyed it a lot Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Thanks all, for checkin' me out!! Very good to be in the 'loop'..  hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"I've loved you forever Long before I knew it was you-- It was you..." I loved those lines! Good poem, you have my vote... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (02-20-2003 07:56 AM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is certainly a touching love poem. Someone should feel extra special receiving this. *s |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like you are one lucky woman---and he is one lucky man! You expressed this love for him so well that I actually got tingles up my spine! Simply beautiful!!! ~ May the flame of your love for one another burn brightly until the end of time! Linda |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
To be loved completely is all one can ever hope for |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Gale, it has been a long time huh? Bravo for this piece...i couldn't stop grinning like a drunk bobcat after reading it...glad life's going on so well with you... plus this reminds me of a favourite song "I Knew I loved you" (title correct?) by Savage Garden... hope life's well |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
great writing... excellent choice of words... much enjoyed regards, sudhir |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah my friend KAILE! that's a great song!! thank you KAILE & SUDHIR for stopping in to this little ditty of mine! hugs, g [This message has been edited by dgvarner (02-22-2003 12:08 AM).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful, beautiful poem. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hey this is a perfect romance poem! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Stick your head out the window .... Can you hear the *sighs* ? Me .... yep ! Lovely gal ....~ Good to see you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dgvarner You could not say it any better. You have my voe. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, great write, definitly great love poem for the book. A more truer write of a hearts twin flame I've never heard. Parker |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
gives me warm chills reading it, because I know how that feels. Miss reading you. hugsssss M |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hi Gale; Long time since I've read your poetry. How incredibly beautiful this is! I only dream of such a love...and pray to know the realty of it...I am so happy for you! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
EL_CAMPEADOR, CHANSON, EARTH ANGEL, HOOT_OWL_RN...seems I missed thanking you folks!! Many thanks to you for your kind words so glad you found it in your interest to read me! MUNDA, ARIES_LUV_PPL, ELLIE, SEYMOUR..thank you whole bunches! I really appreciate you reading!! MISS MARGIE..I hear those sighs....LOL thank you! PARKER..so good to hear from you...funny thing, this is where we met the first time eh! thank you for reading me my good friend... NAKDTHOUGHTS..you know how that feels eh...feels pretty darned good, yes! thank you for reading! hugs! g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
g, Life as it should be for all of us. Nice write. You have my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dgvarner - lovely love poem from your heart. My vote for this... BC |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LARRY & BILL..I thank you! Glad you enjoyed hugs, g |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perfect... Completely - Perfect...  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Gale, now this is a love poem. I love the way you describe your feelings of love. Beautiful. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is delightful. Cause to celebrate.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Definitely worth waiting for. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Now I know how it feels to be loved Completely..." What can I say? I Loved it! Take care!I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Say bump-what ???? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
NAN, LNGJOHNAG, SPIRIT, SUTHERN, VANDANA, EDDIE.. I'm so excited you like me! thanks so much for reading - glad you enjoyed! Love is a grand thing!!MARGIE! thanks for the bump! "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH!! This is so beautiful! ~Hugs and a vote!~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ENCHANTRESS..thanks! VANDANA..glad you enjoyed! hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
It's always a warm, deep feeling to read a poem that paints word pictures so vividly, evocatively and with such elegant originality that it puts the reader in the picture. This is one such poem. Apparently the voting has been completed, so I'll pop it straight into my library for many re-reads. P.S> I think that the theme of my poem *Predestined Love* would resonate with you. Patrick Talty |
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