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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
At the top of a long list of things I am missing Is that glorious pastime referred to as kissing! Not a smooch on the cheek or a buss on the forehead But a knock my socks off, drop me straight into his bed Kind of meeting of lips - a mere soaring of souls Fusion that completes me, makes me feel whole. Such a fine occupation, for day or all night The softest of kisses makes everything right, Validates my existence, assures me my worth, Pulls down the stars and makes heaven on earth. Caress me hello, touch a tender goodbye Fill me with longing, make me gently sigh Help me welcome the morning, keep me smiling all day Place me in your debt - you know I’ll gladly pay! Make my toes curl, send my heart palpitating And I’ll find you perfect, always fascinating. I long to hear stories of how much you miss me But all that can wait - Come here and kiss me! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hey...I know...a kissing booth... for each smooch...ya get a vote No? Ok...I'll vote anyway LOL It wouldnt be a pips book with out Ruth rhymes " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I believe in Pucker Power - and I love this as your submission... Love it... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
*smiling* with a regards, sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! Our southern belle is also a passion flower! You were so convincing, I almost found myself puckering up to plant one on you!---the operative word was "ALMOST"!!! tehe I loved this plea for a buss supreme! Deliciously delightful! ~ Sending you lots of warm hugs and "angel" kisses... EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous poem of poetic lipstick that just has to be in the new book, yay! (kiss on cheek) I send Putto's Kisses and angel hugs your way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
woweee *going off to find someone to create all that pucker power with* *EG* awesome job suthern! [This message has been edited by KristieSue (02-19-2003 11:17 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I agree with that, a kissing booth...and who wracks up the most, is in love! LOL... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Caress me hello, touch a tender goodbye Fill me with longing, make me gently sigh Help me welcome the morning, keep me smiling all day Place me in your debt - you know I’ll gladly pay! Make my toes curl, send my heart palpitating And I’ll find you perfect, always fascinating. I long to hear stories of how much you miss me But all that can wait - Come here and kiss me!" ohhh excellent! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I couldn't have said that any better. Straight and to the point! *s |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
What a GREAT piece. Made me smile! Thanks for the feeling. With vote in hand, I submit and blow you an Internet kiss. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yeah...lovin' this one. Got me smilin' today. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-19-2003 02:15 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I know of watermelon kisses, and butterfly kisses, I even know of puppy dog kisses but this should be gob smacked kisses, for that is how it left me with wonder. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well hello there, I love kisses. Charisma |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the humor, and the searching message. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JM: Can I put TOE in that booth??? The women would be lining up for miles to smooch him. *G* Of course... I'd be knocking them aside with my baseball bat... maybe not a good way to get votes, ya think? LOL Thank you! *S* Nan: I believe in it... it just keeps avoiding me! LOL Thank you! *S* Sudhir: Glad it gave you a smile. Thank you! EA: Let's just leave that at ALMOST... with a few hugs and angel kisses!!! ROFL... I'm so glad you liked it... Thank you!!! M'Toe: Poetic lipstick... what a delightful description! *S* Thank you! KS: Good luck... and thank you! Sunshine: I'd be stuffing the ballot fershure! LOL Thank you! SEA: I appreciate that excellent very much... thank you! *S* Chanson: Thank you very much! Sir Andrew: I'll catch your kiss and cherish it... Thank you! *S* vlraynes: Smiling's good... glad I helped! *S* Thank you! *S* Kethry: ROFL... I don't know gob smacked kisses... but they sound like fun. *S* Thank you, dear friend. *S* Charisma: Don't we all? *sigh* Thank you! *S* bsquirrel: Thank you very much! *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, looky who I found here. I had to get off the computer for awhile....just can't get over this mess with my lungs or something, and I almost missed you. I don't like you back here on this page, so back to the top with you, friend. Anyway, I've been looking for your submission, sweet Suthern Lady. This is a very good choice......and I sure do wish Gary was here right now.......HeeHee LOL Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-19-2003 08:07 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW come here girl and let me hug you tight Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah...the kiss, the kiss...... !!! wonderful!! hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh yes...kissing....wonderful!!! I'm voting now....yep sure am!!!! Bridgette |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I saw your title earlier today and thought I'd have to remember to come back to this...must say, I wasn't dissapointed. Nice change of pace. Like it a lot! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Forget Toe...he has turtle lips! You need a real man....one who can suck a hard-boiled egg through a straw!! The SUnshine State is calling..... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I love this. Everything Sea quoted, and this just makes me smile. Voting. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh you! This was simply wonderful and if I could vote 100 times I would. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Suthern! You had me smiling all the way through this wonderfully rhythmic ode to a kiss. Loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Terrific! enjoyed this muchly Maree. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This one deserves a vote if for nothing else but the smile it brought to my face |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
garysgirl: I bet Gary wishes the same! *G* Thank you so much! *S* Martie: Thank you! *S* Titia: Hugs are welcomed! *S* Thank you! *S* dgvarner: That they are. *S* Thank you so much! *S* Justbleu: I thank you very much... vote and comments are both appreciated! *S* Duncan: I'm glad it was worth the return trip! *S* Thank you! *S* Balladeer: Turtle lips? *G* Are those the ones that latch on and don't let go till it thunders? LOL If so... lemme at him and find me a storm free place! LOL Thank you... and watch out or I'll heed that call. *G* regards2you: I know the purpose of all this is the voting... but my heart's doing such jumping jacks of delight from the comments, I don't think it'll matter that much if I don't make the book. *S* Thank you so much! *S* Mysteria: You sweet lil ballot stuffer you... LOL Thank you so much! *S* Kit: I love smiles almost as much as kisses... so I'm so glad you found smiles here. *S* Thank you very much! *S* Dark Angel: I'm so glad you enjoyed... thank you! *S* hoot: For you to read, enjoy, and find a smile is reward enough for me. *S* Thank you! [This message has been edited by suthern (02-20-2003 04:07 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A lighthearted request. Enjoyed |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Stars? Are you sure it was stars? It's hard to beat the pleasure of that kind of kiss. Fun and excellent write. Voting now. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG!!! This is perfect for the book! YES!!! Oh my..I just love it.. I'm off to find someone to kiss now!!! ~Hugs and a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am happy to vote for a happy poem--especially one by my suthern sis! You left me with a smile on these lips... muah--back atchya! (oh what the hell? give 'em something to talk about I say!) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is way more than great. Joyce |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Stars? Are you sure it was stars? It's hard to beat the pleasure of that kind of kiss. Fun and excellent write. Voting now. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - I've read your poetry for a while now, and finally I have the chance to vote for this one, click my finger goes... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
here's another vote...here's to continued good health, thanks to a natural cure...the kiss [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-21-2003 01:12 AM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hi ya, Belle - I shoulda known you'd submit a poem about smooching - lol. I was wondering: Have you ever submitted your poem about your mother and father, how they met, and what happened? I always loved that poem. It was so well written. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
RSWells: I'm very glad you enjoyed. *S* Thank you! Larry: It is indeed hard to beat. *S* Thank you so much... twice! *G* Enchantress: I hope you have better luck than I've had! LOL Thank you! *S* serenity: That works for me! LOL They've gotta talk about someone... might as well be us! LOL So muah to you, too! *G* Thank you! Joyce: And I way more than thank you. *S* Bill: What a nice thing to say... thank you very much! *S* ecrivan: It does make anything better, doesn't it? *S* Thank you very much! *S* LJA: Well, those that can do... those that can't... write about it! LOL As for Two Halves of a Whole, I thought seriously about choosing it for my submission... in part because of your praise. *S* But I was afraid I wouldn't even get a short one in... much less that tome! *G* Thankie, sir! *S* It sure is good to see you round this place. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (02-21-2003 09:09 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The softest of kisses makes everything right, I loved this and feel the same about kisses. Perfect to bring a smile to any reader. *s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ I heard *laughter* coming from the submission site .... LOL @ 'SUBMISSION' .... 'a knock my socks off, drop me straight into his bed Kind of meeting of lips' I *submit* that it should be ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What a joyous poem!!! I think just the picker-upper or Pucker Upper (natural drug) that our fine new book could use.... Enjoyed reading very much. -Bob |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Love this! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
nakdthoughts: Thank you for the perfect response. *S* Marge: Yup... leave it to me to cause a ruckus. LOL Thank you so much! *S* Lighthouse Bob: Your response certainly picked me up... thank you very much! *S* Munda: I'm so glad... thank you! *S* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful entry, Ruth! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just 'pucking' up~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
suthern~ Lovely thoughts...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Denise & Paul: I thank you both so very much! *S* And Marge... smee-oooooooooooooch! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling here, as I remember someone from my past who used to speak of 'curled toes.' |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
As a definite fan of pucker power...this is perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This is so sweet. Thanks for sharing. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is just the right amount of fun to add to the book. Great submission Dawn |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Midnitesun: Curled toes kisses are worth speaking of! LOL Thank you! Sunnyone: Thank you so very much, fellow fan! *S* Angel: I'm glad you liked... Thank you! *S* DawnG: Thank you so much... glad you liked! *S* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Suthern beloved one do you know how special is your writing? Of course you don’t know that your words drift over my soul in a mist of delight. That your writing is excellent I’ve always known, it isn’t until I see it side by side others that I realise just how excellent. I don’t deny others can write and they write well, you however are one of a handful of writers who excel. If I didn’t know and love you I would have voted for this anyway, I don’t vote for it out of loyalty or love I vote because it is quite simply one of the best there is. Oh and I love you to pieces darling heart, this is simply utterly utterly perfect Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mushy One: I apologize profusely for not thanking you sooner. *S* Your response is, as always, soothing to this suthern soul and pure delight. *S* I thank you so much!!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A kissing booth? Hey, I like that idea. |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
Well it's already accepted into the book I see but I still want to say that I like this! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Smart Chick: It sure would brighten MY day! LOL Thank you very much! *S* Red: I sincerely appreciate each and every vote. *S* But I also appreciate knowing someone likes what they've read, regardless of voting. *S* Thank you ever so much! *S* |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
This is a fine spun and refreshing piece of the poetic art which I enjoyed very much. It goes straight into my library and eventually, I trust, into the coming book. Patrick Talty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to have this in the book! |
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