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Even Still
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ghost_got_married Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 10North Carolina |
Even Still Who stole all the stars from the sky? I think it must have been you! 'Cause I see them sparkling there in your eyes Unbelievable? Yes, I know but it's true I saw them dancing a rhythym of love The first time I dared a glance Today they loom brighter, even still, So majestically shining with romance Don't wish upon a star, reach for one! |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Welcome to pip! A very catching poem to start your journey here! I can't wait to see more poetry from you. ==James== |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful write Jeffrey! What a wonderful entrance to Passions! Welcome. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future. I hope you enjoy your time here. |
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ghost_got_married Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 10North Carolina |
Thanks for the welcome but I have been a memeber here for quite a while I just forgot my old password so I had to make a new one LOL some of you will remember my name I am sure   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome back, Ghost! Have been looking for your first post...don't disappear again, y'hear?! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the smile on my face this poem gave me.. welcome back! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Jeff! Welcome back....good to see you again! Wonderful first post too! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write Jeff!! I see those sparkling stars in the eyes of my love too... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ghost, A lovely write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ghost...beautiful...helen |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Oh those star struck eyes....very Nice. Enjoyed the read ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Congratulations to our friendly ghost! and welcome back to the crypt. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Jeffrey...  I don't know if you've been here since I came or not.... so, I'll welcome you back. I enjoyed reading your poem and hope you'll stay around and post more. Looks like you had lots of friends here.  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-04-2003 12:15 AM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hehe the beginning is so cute. the stars in your eyes! what a concept |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definately beautiful! Welcome to Passions! Hope to read more! |
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ghost_got_married Junior Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 10North Carolina |
thanks everyone for all the great replies, Ron just sent me a new password for my old username so I probably won't be posting under this name anymore thanks again |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, may the stars in your loves eyes always shine, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jeffrey, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeffrey, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-04-2003 12:00 AM).] |
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