Open Poetry #24 |
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Heart's Heartbreak |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA ![]() |
I have a good friend who has become quite dear Trying to help everyone his heart shows very clear Always quick to reply to all of his dear friends His loving words of others poetry go to all without ends Writing poetry about his life he tells us of his joy About trying all his life to be a real good boy Then one fine day on the great big internet He found a dream girl fell in love with no regret He's told us of their love of how they laugh and play And of how his love for her has grown more and more each day Then when I came back earlier to these pages of blue I read a poem of his that shocked me, I tell you He told us in his poem of his heart's heartbreak As I read I felt his pain the pain of his heart-ache He said he thinks his love has completely ended Oh how I hope and pray his heartache will be mended I hate to feel the tears of a heart filled with so much love "Please", I pray to God, "Send help to him from above" Hang in there, little buddy....we all love you and will help you get through all this, too ![]() [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2003 02:45 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
These are very kind words, Ethel... ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Nan......I know all our hearts are going out to our dear little friend. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I'm still quite new here, and I woudn't know for whom your poem is written. Nonetheless, I think you've got great empathy here. A new year brings new promises, so hope his year will be a good one. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
jjote, thanks for reading and replying. Yes, I do, too. "Love makes the world go around" |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ethel, very nice and understanding writing. Our hearts and hands reach out to bring comfort. Darn, hate to see anyone hurting. Hugs, Marti |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, me too, Marti. We get to know our friends here on these pages of blue and laugh with them when they're happy and cry with them when they're sad, don't we? "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I appreciate the love here, and contribute prayers and hugs to those who need them. Thanks for bringing the call to arms. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Kathleen. Sometimes an e-mail helps those who are hurting, I think. I know that you do, too. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You've got a kind heart Ethel. What a good friend you must be. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Duncan. I appreciate you saying that. I try to live by the "Golden Rule", though I fail to do so at times. Thanks again... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Thank you Ethel, thank you! You truly are a wonderful friend and I'm blessed to have all you Passions friends! I have nothing more to say right now! ![]() Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We all love you and appreciate you, sweet Noah...... Always remember that we need each other to help through this life. You have so many friends here, Noah. You are a very big part of Passions In Poetry, and a big part of our "Family Of Friends". ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Ethel~ ![]() |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh ethel, we couldn't wish for a better friend than you. what you've done here is so special. our prayers are with him. and we all know he's going to be ok, and come out even shinier, with as much love as he posesses and shares, how could he not? learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
Very nice |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, that's so true....somebody like him always comes out on top... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Jeff.... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Ethel, that is so nice of you. I'm sure you made him feel a lot better. Unless I am wrong and it isn't who I think it is. Oh no, my tounge is getting messed up ![]() Never be normal! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I was glad to see you were here. Sorry I didn't see this earlier. Thanks for replying. I hope it did make him feel better...... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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