Another Passing thought of you.

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Open Poetry #24

Another Passing thought of you.

Fee
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since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-17 12:42 PM

Rivers of passion
Running from the depths of our souls
Deep within our hearts

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2002-12-17 01:09 AM

hi....I think that this was intended to be a haiku but I'm not sure...if it was, you have 8 syllables in the second line..."run" instead of "running" would fix that. The thought is a beautiful one indeed.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-12-17 03:33 PM

Fee, so good to welcome you home again...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-12-17 03:40 PM

Lovely sentiments.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2002-12-17 04:20 PM

I love to immerse myself in this kind of river.
Good to see you here!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-12-17 04:50 PM

(sigh) Oh Fiona, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, and may the stream of life always flow deep in your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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