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Set My Life to Music
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Set My Life to Music |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
*I'm stuck in a rut, so re-post!* -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- His smile...so entrancing He sent my heart dancing Set my life to music And swept my feet out from under me Twirled me around Thought he'd never let me down The rush was so intense Felt myself move in every sense Never wanted the music to stop But every song has to end So I hang up my dancing shoes They look so worn and used The blisters on my feet Were worth it in the end Even though I lost a friend I gained memories that will never fade Memories that are etched onto the dance floor Where you and I will tango...nevermore |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
music is one of my passions. This is a great write! A sad but beautiful one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
An amusing little read this day. Thank you for the smiles. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sarah, your critique button isn't logged on, so I won't offer any. I liked this poem the first time around, I'm glad you brought it back. Music is such in integral part of society...it's hard to hang up those dancing shoes, no matter how worn they are. I like the metaphors here...you have a quiet way of getting your feelings across. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed the use of metaphors in this write. Well done. |
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