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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Double vodka, please… If I don’t succeed in passing out before midnight, I’ll have to imagine her kissing him. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Not sure how you do so much in so few words...this was great... ...or...you could sip the first and imagine her kissing you. Smiles from ThisDiamond Excellent. Happy New Year |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Or, switch back to R&C? Another good short painful sip.  2003 cheers to you, Big D. Jiminy says hello. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Not a nice thought... but you sure got it across! Knock yourself out Duncan~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
painful |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOHHH, this one hurts. A lot said in less than twenty........  "Love makes the world go around" |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Short and sour....make mine a whiskey sour! -Venus |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
like I said D...a poetic kick in the chest... you just do this so succinctly well.. R.B. would have loved this one  Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not allowed... that imagining stuff... Very good Duncan, m'man... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heart-breaking, love...Take care. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Make mine a double as well...and while you are at it, keep them coming... |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
Ouch...sad. You said so much in so few words. Good going. Hugs. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You drink your vodka Pass out tonight I'll come to comfort and hold you tight Well, that might be as bad as your imagination LOL Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Ouch....... this one went straight to the heart. Okay bring me something to drink also. We deserve a night of celebrating the new year without letting hidden thoughts surface. You did a great job with this. ~Salty |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, this doesn't sound like a Happy New Year. Hey, if only enough drinks would really work. Hugs Sandra |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Ouch! What's a good cure for hangovers? Excellent write. You say the stuff so well that I have hurt too much to put into words. Shenachie |
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