Open Poetry #24 |
Whispers of Father Winter |
dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Upon the snow white pages Time dries the blood ink that cries Another piece of me flows Belies the heart for the entire world to see Only sheltered from perspectives Made of fact or fiction, Some wonder, others ponder, Some know, others can only speculate, Still others hesitate, some never to care. As I allow the whispers of Father winter To bring about a voice from within Telling me to once again, Write down my soul word for word The influence of yesterday now long ago Writes another time line upon my face That I may share with God’s grace…tomorrow Someday, this all too shall pass The blizzards The shadows The stars Even time itself Will never last For Father winter will speak to me no more My Spirit and I shall walk through my maker’s door The blood ink written upon pages of snow Shall in a whisper…turn to ashes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
shadows will pass, yes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful write. Winter is special to me...the snow represents a purity, and a respite...a time to rejuvinate. I see it in a positive, albeit cool way. Looking forward to more of your talented works. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful. You have lots of talent to write, Dennis. I enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"write another time line upon my face" I like that line, as I do this entire poem. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all for your kind words and comments, they made my day! |
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