Open Poetry #24 |
Ode to "E" |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You're luscious in your sibilance sublime in awesome resonance I'm tremulous in my hesitance intoxicated dissonance Would I, should I, could I dare to Would she, should she, could she care to See in me something to bare to Find for us something to wear to Play beneath tonight's full moon Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ken, I just love this, sweet friend, you always paint the moon and stars so gorgeously in your words, this is a true treasure! (sigh) I am not sure who E is but I know whoever this is you're speaking of will love this so much too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-17-2002 01:19 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahh Ken!! This is beautiful!! It is for me...is it not?? I am honoured...and speechless...(for once!) Thank you so much! ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Playing beneath the full moon? Sure sounds like a fun night! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoa! I liked! Sounds like quite a night! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ah Ken, it could be for none other than Lady E... well done, Sir! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
kayjay Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ken, this is very good. My Love and I like to "play underneath the full moon", too...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Yes, this is poetry in motion. Thank you. etoodog |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well if this didn't make Nancy's day--and night!--nothing will! Thanks for putting a smile on her face! I'll bet she has quite a few male admirers! You may have to stand in line! Earth Angel |
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