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Vestment of a Sigh
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Vestment of a Sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Vestment of a Sigh A cry, a sear, a sigh, a tear A prance nuance without a dance A touch of art, a clutch at heart A breeze that smart, a tease of dart Without a worn you thorn our goal You shut the door upon my soul. The divot of your greenery Showed a mirror I could not see. A phantoms ride in mist of hide A fantasy without abide A thrust of lance in lust and speared And with a puff you disappeared I cannot ken the life of then Nor can I den a life of when I am a simple soul you see And cannot sail upon your sea. My ship is built a crew of two A birth for me a birth for you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dancing here...and smiling with the innuendos and the inner rhymes...me knows a few little ones that are going to join me in the dance... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, It is always a pleasure to dance with you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A prance nuance without a dance" Morning Sy! This line is SO beautiful.. The entire piece is full of fantasy dance, but this line...will dance in my mind all day! ~Morning hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, it's just fantastic the way you can write these marvelous words morning after morning. And my friend, it's always a delight to have tea with you first thing. I look forward to you getting my day started. Hugs, Marti A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, my goodness this is a beautiful morning write. Just what I needed on this grey, damp last day of 2002. Happy New Year sweet soul!!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and Randy has a saddle built for 2 and Im on my way to fly with you  Happy New Year Stinky love... heres to a new year of rhymes divine and winkies!!   Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wonderful rythm and rhyme thanks Sey [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-31-2002 01:26 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Good afternoon and hugs back. Marti, Happy you start with me. Nightshade Happy New Year sweet. JM, Can't wait for you to arrive. Aenimal Thank you and A Happy New Year. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
enjoyed sailing your "fantasea"--Happy New Year! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Thank you for the read and I hope you have a great Hew Year. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Seymour, yes, yes, just because we may all be mere mortals doesn't mean we can't pedal for another and make one feel secure and close to home! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you sure started this year off in style didn't you? This was sure a definite  Happy New Year to to of my favorite folks.~ The soul lies buried in the ink that does not flow ~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh master of the tickling rhyme, I bow most humbly to your passages!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Yes you are right. Sharon, OK I'll keep it. Barry, Hey you do pretty well yourself. Thanx |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You sail the sea in style, Sweet Sy... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm so glad that you took us sailing into your rhyme..... It really did make me feel like dancing a little jig...HeeHee!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan And you are a lady of style. garysgirl You are sweet. |
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