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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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I must be dreaming, the sky isn't blue. I must be denying, that I don't love you. I must be crazy, not to believe. I must be dreaming, I want you. I must be denying, I know I can't have you. I must be crazy, BUT I LOVE YOU!! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
not crazy...when love hits, or what one thinks is love it can be very hard to rationalize  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great feelings expressed! Love the hearts there. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Thank you. This is actually about my love obsession with writing. I love to write yet I am constantly told by people who love me that I am a horrible writer. (my family) and then I come on passions and I hear the opposite. I dont know the truth. Geez I just want to know the truth. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The truth..since in many cases the term truth when aplied to art form is subjective instead of objective it is always likely to be confused by conflicting views, depending on the taste of the one commenting. Technically...we all can learn to become better writers and to avoid the cliche, etc. What I see in your writing is a heart and a desire to express what is in that heart. To me, that means what you write is genuine, real in its emtotions and motives. If you were writing only to write, and only with the idea of recognition, your words and compositions would be different. Are you a good writer? Well... I keep reading you... and so do others. Must be something in your words that touches or reaches an audience. Isn't that what good writers do? Happy New Year to you... |
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