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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-12-30 10:01 PM

He painted her with true frivolity
there was no special part the more lovely
He laid her on rose strewn deliciousness
as petals bathed her skin in sweet caress
A beauty, as her innocence disposed
awoke in trance of wonder so imposed
She placed her hand upon her fevered brow
in vast confusion did she ask him how
Then cried out once for him to truly stay
alas he glanced but once and turned away.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-12-30 10:45 PM

Very nice...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-12-30 11:08 PM

Reminds me of some of my dreams, the
elusiveness of what is desired...wanted
and not held...

You do this tooo good Sandra....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-31 01:21 AM

beautifully sad

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-12-31 10:05 AM

elusive...and sad...

It is nice to see you writing again...

Happy New year to you, and wishes that all things good are yours

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2002-12-31 05:34 PM

Ah, lil sis, artists are sometimes like that...their passion lies in the art, and the poor model is a tool to complete the canvas. This is very sad, but also very true.
Love to see you here writing...the table is not complete without you!

Today is a new beginning!!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-12-31 07:11 PM

Knowing sighs~
bittersweet is that last glance!

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

7 posted 2003-01-01 09:10 AM

this is quite beautiful in its sadness--enjoyed!! Happy New Year!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-01-01 09:18 AM

Sandra, very beautiful, but very sad. I relate, too........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-01-01 10:30 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, a true artist is one who can be able to identify the colors inside of someone, not just on the outside, and I know soon you will find the one who possesses that unique quality! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2003-01-01 11:06 PM

What a vivid picture you painted with this one Sandra, I could see her standing there. Very well done indeed.

Happy New Year to you and "all your girls"

(((hugs)))

~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~

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