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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-12-30 03:39 PM

When the day chooses you.
will you play it?
when it hits you soft,
will you abandon it as weak?
when all that it has been,
is just what you need,
A little break from the cold and hard.

Is it often,
you wonder why greater tears fall,
only when the reality takes flight.
giving in to all the things you deny,
that are living in your mind.

Kissing you slowly,
beckoning the fate,
i am so grateful,
for every tearful day,
That lead me here to you,
to this perfect madness.

sorry. this is poor. i've been finding writing hard lately. too many hangovers to be able to sit upright i think. lol. hope you all had a lovely xmas. i've missed being here! i've missed u all. nice to be back reading your work. love u all lots!! xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (12-30-2002 03:41 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-12-30 03:56 PM

Hi Gemma...

It's really good to see you back. I've missed your cheerful face, too.

I hope that you had a very merry Christmas.

I like your poem, by the way....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-30 06:45 PM

dont you love being madly in love?
very good poetry

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2002-12-31 04:18 AM

The only madness you suffer is thinking this writing is poor. If hangovers produced this then its off to the pub for me, anything but Guiness though it's like rye bread soaked in water, damn brits lol
Just kidding I'm a canadian, you know part of the commonwealth and all, more commonly refered to in england as 'Those wankers"

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2002-12-31 06:57 AM

Awwww Ethel, always lovely to see your heart warming comments,you know how much they mean to me. thankyou so very much.

Inked, i cant decide wether i do love being in love or not! but i don't think i'd have it any other way. i'm glad you enjoyed, thankyou.

Raph, i'll join u, no guinness for me, who invented guinness? THEY were obviously feeling a bit of madness too.i work part time in a pub, and it makes me sick every time i pour it!
Thanks for the reply friend, and the wonderful compliment.
And if i catch anyone using that word against the good canadian folk or anyone else, i'll make sure i turn my head, and walk away from the fools!

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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