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Open Poetry #24

Outweigh

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2002-12-30 03:10 PM

OUTWEIGH

Time has not diminished
The gentler memories
Of a cherished
But long irretrievable
Relationship.

Such recollections
Are likened
To the rosebush,
Where the beauty
Of the blooms
Far outweigh
The thorny barbs.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-30 03:19 PM

Welcome to PIP, very nice words thanks for sharing

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2002-12-30 04:14 PM

enjoyed this. it was fresh and sharp.
welcome to passions!
lots of love, gemma xxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-30 04:24 PM

I liked this poem, too.
By the way, I don't remember if I welcomed you or not, but if so, I welcome you again. I hope you enjoy it here. I'm enjoying reading your poetry and hope to read more.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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