Open Poetry #24 |
Designed Intent |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Maybe, I only loved his words, those ones I read "the in between" Maybe, I have grown away not feeling it, what use to mean Perhaps it is a wayward thought induced to end, a dream I bought Or maybe it's somewhere inside, the lack of it, the less to hide For now I sit in loneliness the more of not, obsessing less And end I must, the feel of this the last of words, his touch of kiss I never wanted the "in between" that always hid, to me, unseen. Maybe, perhaps I've grown away the feeling gone, the meaning blurred. Maybe, I only loved his words, intent designed; between, unheard. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-30-2002 12:33 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love his silence and it's been long past time to end. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I live in silence, sometimes a sound or two is welcome M |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Damn, that is one powerful poem. And the way you designed the words..awesome. Sandra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You always "design your words" excellently...this was no exception...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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