Open Poetry #24 |
Caressed |
Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Caressed Gazing into your eyes I reach to touch your face But caressed your heart instead |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that happens |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
This was breath-takingly beautiful.....flows along the same lines as one I wrote a few months ago... A Room full of darkness What I long for, the touch of your hand on the small of my back… pulling me into your arms, chest to chest, for a kiss that I wish would last forever. To feel your touch, fingers gliding so softly against my back, feels like silk. I feel you tracing my body with your fingers, so delicate, so gentle. Here we are, in a room full of darkness. But your heart permits you to see what your eyes don’t allow. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is really beautiful......don't know how I missed it..... "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-08-2003 04:47 PM).] |
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