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Open Poetry #24

corpus muscarius

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

0 posted 2002-12-30 07:54 AM

corpus muscarius

It has been my observation
after much consideration
that being good
is the thing most prized
by most flies.

Therefore the rules
of what makes good
are the rules
most scrutinized.

Rule number one:
what makes good
is what feels good.

Rule number two:
there are no more rules.

Thus we see
by truth and lies
what feels good
is most prized.

No more rules,
but this may be said:
those who violate
rule number one
are not flies
and should be dead.

copyright 2002

[This message has been edited by mirror man (12-30-2002 07:56 AM).]

neveah5
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since 2002-11-22

Posts 197
Ohio

1 posted 2002-12-30 09:04 AM

interesting
very creative

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

2 posted 2002-12-30 10:43 AM

You are very kind. Thank you.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-12-30 12:08 PM

ROTFL...and yet there is such seriousness flying around within this piece.
Enjoyed.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-30 01:07 PM

you and your flies...neat stuff to think about. Love the presentation of this.

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

5 posted 2002-12-31 03:26 AM

Midnitesun -- yes. Fortunately, we can talk about flies and no one gets offended. Though I suppose, now that I said that, some fly lover will be offended. Thanks.

passing shadows -- thanks. they're okay as long as they're outside.

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