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Take Heed |
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RebelFolk Junior Member
since 2002-12-27
Posts 15Nashville, TN |
Forget all that you've been told The meaning's lost its getting old A new breeze blows from the western sky Its brewing here in the child's eye Your hate your greed your lying ways Leave them now for bettter days A church bell's chime rings morning near A fateful cry and a child's tear Fire below brings man to his knee his whicked ways he could not see So travel not where others go Take heed these words and your heart shall grow Music is the language God used to create the Universe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definately time for change...good write! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I feel the anger in this poem and wish they would leave myself - well done. May a handshake, smile, kiss or a hug be the best present you give or receive this year. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hear! Hear! Passionate and perfect in thought and deed. I bow to you and yours. |
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