Open Poetry #24 |
Something or Someone |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What I've become evolution or death Conformity has never been an option Ideals a fickle indulgence Each wake a struggle or challenge of and with so called authorities The cold hard truth of logic or mysticism But there are moments in weakness Tired of standing alone That I've wished I could believe in something or someone [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-30-2002 01:58 AM).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Tempting, isn't it? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very tempting! I feel the same now and again myself. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Krawdad...Maddeningly so at times... resist or succumb Thanks Mysteria not an easy choice [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-30-2002 01:32 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's a lot of work but I know I have to believe in myself before anyone else does. There's always a catch!! Enjoyed your poem Raph~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Conformity has never been an option ************************* I'm glad you aren't a plastic cookie cutter. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks blues, believing in yourself is only one step and always the hardest Kacy no not a plastic cookie cutter, more like a chainsaw lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
from the inside out, honest, but dont be so jaded, youre too young, let something/someone/catch u sometimes |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Dixie not fun is it? Inked what is too young? You're never too young be jaded in this world |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i believe something, i believe that you will never willingly let conformity be the option. and this makes me smile. you're strength of character is shown in such a lot of your work raph. i like the reality in your words. lots of love, gemma xxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, I can always feel your heart in whatever subject you choose to write about. I like that very much. You are so REAL, friend...a very good trait, I might add.....Thank you for being you..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Gemma you just made my day week month year!!! Thanks Ethel and a thanks for being you REAL and SWEET and THOUGHTFUL etc... |
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