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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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And to this end I wonder still what was your conceptual depiction of us you, the artist du jour, making portraits of joy yours, not mine You scrawl your words so casually across my canvas and I am still blank to you I wonder, then what was your conceptual depiction of us Paint well, my artist, but never forget this woman that you painted once and then, with little care painted over. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn, Sandra! This is beautiful... Wistful, rueful A lovely piece. Glad you've struck a bargain with your muse. Ed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Sandra! Good to see you posting here! All the best in 2003! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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darkling Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90altered state of mind |
I loved the last bit about being painted over, its a wonderfully placed phrase. Please keep adding to the topics, as I look forward to more from you. Darkling |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, Sandra... I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope to see more... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra - ah, lovely write. Have missed your words here. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sandra! so good to see you posting. This one hits right between the eyes. What an ending...to be casually painted over is the absolute pits. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Like your metaphor. esp. like "and I am still blank to you" And good to see you posting again. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Happy to see you again. Your works have deepened...a crimson red I think. Powerful and clear. Smiles from ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so heartdelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your tears and I wish for loves colors to come and for your Van Gogh to make sure he leaves the colors as they should be! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sandra!!! How wonderful it is to read your words again~ I don't know what to say to this, you've painted me right next to you and it all comes back so clearly. I have missed you, and your poetry is as stunning as ever. Happy New Year to you sweet poetess!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I often wonder the same thing, and feel the same way |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written, Sandra. I loved the concept between artist and canvas that you've captured in this piece, and the visual it brought to mind. Very much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Only one way out, flip the pencil around to dismiss and recycle the palimpsest. Good to see you again. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sometimes what one see's is a different image then another ... sometimes a blank canvas is another one's soul. I truly hope you find an artist that can translate the beauty of your heart, from brush to canvas .... truly a masterpiece! ... remember, smiles are soul deep. Always *** |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'd have to echo Eds damn. This is truly one of your best Sandra. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sandra, I have missed you. Welcome back. Hope all is well. I really enjoyed reading this. Hugs, Marti A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah... nice to read you again.. you captured well the questions in this... someday someone will come along and remove the layers of paint covering you...and I know it will not be a blank canvas that they find... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A great write Sandra..and what an ending, like other I have missed your words and hope you are well. hugss M |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh god Sandra you have no idea...how much this is ME today, yesterday..can't see an end either... hugs... we should get together over coffee and cry into together..hah..  K |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It's so good to be back with all of you. Thanks for responding to this. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
So many questions. Do we ever find answers? I fear not my friend. Just keep the good memories safe and warm, for they are precious indeed. The wondering why it ended? We can ask time and time again, and never have the answer. Good to see you writing again Sandra. You can never win or lose |
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