Open Poetry #24 |
Just To Be....... |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Guess, I found myself Through this misty memories Yesterday's gone Yet the love Is strong Guess I found myself a way Through this path Never knowing Just to be here with you Just to be alive again Just to feel your love Tonight Just to hear your voice Another day Is passing by Just to be me here again Just to be myself again Found a reason To my love Yet Those memories Become only my path To love Just to be with you Just to be me again Feeling lost In a song Here with your love Long nights Misty memories And to the dawn..... Just to be me here again [This message has been edited by vandana (12-29-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This flows like a beautiful melody. Lovely! |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
I like this it seems hopeful |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful song of love Vandana. Enjoyed this much. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I love this. It really is like a love song...very beautiful..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely vandana...James |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This really is beautiful flows as a song keep it up! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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darkling Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90altered state of mind |
mmm. It leaves me satisfied. I love the repetition of the word guess. Guess is an interesting word, provoking thoughts. Very nice read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Just let all your dreams and hopes be set free and you will be all you desire, sweet friend, I wish for this love to find your way and for every morning and evening to feel like a fantasy come true! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Those memories Become only my path To love Just to be with you Just to be me again Feeling lost In a song Here with your love Long nights Misty memories And to the dawn..... Just to be me here again ============================== beautiful poem of longing and heart on sleeve Vandana..just lovely!! Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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