Open Poetry #24 |
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A Love Poem |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
I met you not knowing (yet having a strange feeling) that one day we might be joined at the heart that we would become best friends and fall in love two different lives but two similar people You're a good man a good person and a great father something so hard to find you dont make me guess or wonder if your intentions are true or if your love is real You've given me a reason to want to live and live my life well you've given me more than I've ever had you've shown me how to trust and love without so much fear you've given me stablity of the heart and mind something i've never had I love you in a complete way its calm and unquestionable unconditional and neverending its there without thinking or asking and without you in my life i'd be a glass half empty a tree with no roots a body with no soul So no matter what happens in our lives no matter the hard times or the rough paths we end up on remember that you are always in my heart and that my love for you will prosper ![]() |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Great Words and thoughts.... Keep writing... Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
All blessings to you. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Heather, this is a very good love poem. I like it........ ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Neveah...Sounds like a good man...one to keep. I'm sure he'll love this poem! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Heather Your words relayed a deep love and devotion and were beautifully written. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Thank you all for your kind replies. and yes, Martie, he is a very good man ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is a nice tribute to the man in your life, hope its reciprocal, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Heather... This is very beautifully penned. Yes, an excellent love poem. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Heather - this man sounds like a keeper. Enjoyed this poem of love. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love you in a complete way its calm and unquestionable unconditional and neverending its there without thinking or asking ==================================== that is a very rare thing..youre very lucky and well inspired..this is lovely..its sincerety is its true gift. YES...a lovely love poem ![]() Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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