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A Touch Upon The Gate
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A Touch Upon The Gate |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
With but a touch upon the gate, a waterfall comes forth And all that stores within the vessel empties These winds that hurricane inside to velvet stillness Black and soft And I am not afraid of the welling that comes forth Released these deep and simmering sounds For I scramble to the core of you and harbor there Warm and pink I cannot touch the bottom or the end, or stop the surge There is no control of this or you or what grows hot And there is no other that can fill or empty me Blue and still Another day to rest this soul, and I will swim in waters warm And think in terms of night and sleep contented in the bubbles These winds to breezes cool in sun upon the beach Gold and clear Copyright Kkh 12/28/02 |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like the way you brought the breezes and beaches and velvet skies into this. I love all those scenes in my thoughts...... Thank you.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Can I just simply say that .... awww gosh, you write beautifully....every time... without fail....and each poem, touches us as only you know how... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Well done a very good write, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely - Enjoyed !! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Mmmmmmm. Just so special, so beautiful, so you. I love your writing and you never fail to out-write yourself. Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You made me hold my breath. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your love of nature and the beach speaks thought this pretty poetic vision |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the scene...being ten minutes from the beach...it is a beautiful image. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very well done, this takes the reader there. Dennis |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
beautiful images! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - another diamond written, imagery is great... BC |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
A beautiful gem of a write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I had no idea that you write in living color, and each one looks so good on you TD~ I will never cease to be amazed at the beauty of your words!!! I mean that! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (12-30-2002 11:25 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A wonderful sparkling write.I read this while listening to the gentle water sounds trickling in a small homedics indoor waterfall. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
No empty vessel here. Seems you cover all the senses. Rest, and dream. Enjoyed. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Shining poetry like a diamond! wonderful.. aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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