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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-12-27 11:31 AM

*~~~~*

Moonlight melodies
flowing from the velvet skies
with soft caressings
The twinkle of stars
as if keeping the rhythm
with a steady beat
Of a sweet love song
clearly playing in our hearts
as we gaze above
Into the clear sky
holding each other closely
with tender touches
We sing a duet
underneath the moonlit sky
in sync together
Such pleasure we feel
with love surrounding us both
as music we hear
Leaving impressions
of everlasting love shared
in our hearts always

*~~~~*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-12-27 12:03 PM

Such tender beauty and romance in your words Ethel. Enjoyed the feelings in this.

Happy New Year to you~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-27 12:13 PM

Lori, thank you, friend. I appreciate that.

Happy New Year, to you, too, Lady.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2002-12-27 12:30 PM

Undying love, hopeless romantic, these are just some of the labels you wear with such pride and such grace Ethel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-12-27 01:41 PM

Raph.........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2002-12-27 04:14 PM

Hello Ethel

This was so very beautiful, with such wonderful images. I hope you had a lovely Christmas.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2002-12-27 04:26 PM

You romantic, you!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-12-27 10:11 PM

(sigh) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I wish for this moonlight sonata to always be recited to your heart and be narrated with the tone of true love forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-12-27 11:45 PM

Hello Sue,
thank you for your sweet reply.
Yeah, I had a great Christmas. How about you?
I hope you have a Happy New Year, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-12-28 12:41 PM

Michael.......

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2002-12-28 02:32 AM

I only wish to be as romantic!

dhicks03
Member

since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

11 posted 2002-12-28 02:43 AM

Wow, this was excellent! Reminds me of a piece I wrote called "The Stars Lark" which I shall post. Not nearly as good as this though.

dhicks03
Member

since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

12 posted 2002-12-28 02:45 AM

We walk slowly,
caught in the touch of our hands
While visions dance around us
The Stars lark, listening to our Love
Spellbound by our romance
They flicker with applause from above

Our hearts beat as one,
Echoing to heaven
As we look into each others eyes
Our enchanted moment is silent
Awaiting the Sound of our kiss

The touch of our lips
Steals our breath away
Blessed moment we will cling
Our love so right, so dear,
Now we hear, the angels in heaven sing

And as our hearts entwine with our love
the stars and heaven our love has witnessed
We'll seal with a kiss,
in total bliss
Our Love
Our gift from God, Above

Copyright © 2000-2001 Dennis Hicks
All Rights Reserved by Author

dhicks03
Member

since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

13 posted 2002-12-28 02:49 AM

Sorry, don't know how I did this...tried to delete but couldn't.
So Sorry!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2002-12-28 08:28 AM

Oh Dixie, sweet friend, you are as romantic......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2002-12-28 08:35 AM

Dennis, thank you for reading and replying to my poem. I really appreciate it.
Oh, and the beautiful poem you posted on this thread is quite all right. No need to delete it. When I first came here I put things on that I tried to delete, and couldn't. Now I try to edit everything before I click the "submit" button. But, like I said, it's completely okay that you put the poem here. It just might have gotten more attention if you had posted it on a seperate thread.
Anyway, I really think your poetry is good. You are a very talented writer, Dennis, and I hope to read a lot more of your poetry.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

16 posted 2003-01-21 07:51 AM

oh wow ethel,

i'm glad i found this, it brings back memories of my weekend. my heart skipped a beat as i read this, you have such a way with setting a romantic scene. i suppose its just all the romance in your life! this goes into my library, romantic friend.

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

17 posted 2003-01-21 10:50 AM

Ethel, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
Although if you don't mind, I think I'll look out and up from inside under my puff.
It's absolutely freezing beyond my words here in the whole Northeast and Canada.

Huggles and Snuggles, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

18 posted 2003-01-21 11:35 AM

Ethel,

Very romantic. Enjoyed.

Hugs to you and Gary Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2003-01-21 12:19 PM

Very tender, very romantic.....**Sigh**
enjoyed this so much...

Lauren~

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

20 posted 2003-01-23 02:12 PM

Garysgirl, you write so beautifully of love. Sigh!

SG

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

21 posted 2003-01-23 03:27 PM

Gemma....

Marti......

Pat.....

Lauren....

SimplyGold......

I thank each and every one of you for reading and replying to my poem.
You are all so sweet and wrote such loving comments. I
appreciate every one of them.

With big hugs to all of you from me,
Ethel

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