Open Poetry #24 |
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Socccer mom's dilemma |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio ![]() |
upon rainbow seas, he planted lollipop trees, sometimes straying outside the lines, his cows didnt have enuf room to roam, he'd say, and teacher smiled,but said redo, as his coloring book would come home, l6 years round the circle, today the "gifted"writer needs to use the "F" word , for some needed emphasis, for high school lit, and the soccer mom is called to school, pleading his case, for "art's" sake, as the vice principal tells her to go home, so gather those A's my "gifted" son, for NYU, at $38k a pop, cause Mama was born with just a plastic spoon, so a scholarship will need to await you, and a few blocks down on Soho streets, the galleries draw in the masses, with bronze statues of women with l2 pair of tits, with urine,and feces swiped on the saints, and the critics acclaim the kindergarten rebels, so what price art, and when is it okay for mama to tell her son "do your art, dont sell your soul or compromise", for a golden ticket |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, there are a lot of emotions written in this one. Is he really planning to go to NYU? I was just wondering because my grand-daughter is planning to go there. She wants to major in "dance". She plans to open her own dance studio in the future. She's had this dream most of her life. "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, its on his list.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Did that, NYU is a busy place, one can get lost there. enjoyed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, i know, its close to NJ tho, so the prince could still come home now and then and bring his laundry to mama i lived my teenage years down there, it is overpowing, but the city has a lot to offer him |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
It's not easy being an artist, I don't envy them. Having to deal with the fine lines between artistic cause and selling your soul just to be heard or seen. A line some couldn't handle. But then some never had a soccermom as brilliant in her own write, to support them. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The trials of a teen and a soccer mom... Like this write, cute, nice use of metaphors.... Good luck to the prince... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
All the best to your son and with Mum supporting him I'm sure he'll be fine ![]() Really enjoyed this. Maree ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I think, with you as his mom, he'll do just fine ![]() |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the good thoughts, yes mamabear spoils her prince.(and her princess too).......they can do no wrong, |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
inkedgoddess, hmm, a tough call here--to fill the stomach or the soul?...but i'm sure you will guide your son along... enjoyed reading this |
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