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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Creep in, whilst i'm not looking whisk up, the butterflies that invade the inside of me feathery kisses you play upon my neck catch sight, of the devilish dimple in your cheek, I weaken with that way, our eyes are caught soft stands of your hair, tickle and tease as your lips are mine, white sheets of heaven reflect, the glint of devotion I know within your touch. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful words Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
white sheets of heaven reflect, the glint of devotion So pretty this is... Nicely said gemjop~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I used to feel that way...nice write, thanks for the reminder |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice done.... I enjoyed the gentle feel and wording.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop This surely is a gem. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very good poem.. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thankyou for your replies, youre all so sweet. this poem captures a favourite memory of mine, which i will hopefully be repeating very soon!yay! ha ha! thankyou again, i appreciate your support. glad you enjoyed. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful words gemma. Excellent balance of the romantic and the erotic. raph |
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