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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Oh God, I don't know what to think; I don't know what to do or feel. I'm stuck... possibly trapped. I write too emotionally for some and not emotionally enough for others. Where my niche is I don't know I don't know if I WANT to find it. I want romance but it's not given me. Guess it would help if I weren't afraid to ask for it. I'm just... not me. All I want is a poem; admittance that he feels how he says but I don't recieve. I won't ask because I want him to think of it on his own maybe I'm just dreaming of something that'll never happen so I sigh and feel sorry for myself because I'm too lazy to walk downstairs to fetch my journal; and hence the hardening process begins my maturing from being a teenager with teenage emotions goes on hold again, and I admit that I want sympathy and recognition I just want to be free from my own self |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I liked this...the title seemed sad...but the content was so honest. We all must experience the wings that born with, and remember that love is not clarvoyant...Tell him what you need. Smiles from ThisDiamond |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
i feel your pain girl. its definately rough, bein a teen with all those deep emotions.  drop me a line if you ever need a stranger to talk to  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Emotions of the young (in comparison to an older (much) person) can be a roller coaster at Coney Island in the middle of the Summer while it is snowing, so to speak.... Patience, a virtue seldom gained through heredity...slowly comes to most and is most invaluable to those who possess it.... Ya can't make the horse drink...and sometimes you cannot even lead it to water... I think you are doing just fine... |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Ah, being a teenager can be rotten. Can't give you any advice on this but that my sister went through the same thing and had to stay away from fast food and vitamins. Anyway, it's very honest and that's good. Merry Christmas. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Skyfire...sweetie, Those who become hard aren't honest! Sorry you are disqualified.  And as for your plight, when it's right you'll know. BTW, shame on him. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I would not be a teenager again if I could. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
I love the honesty of this piece. Keep the faith, he'll come around. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
it's a phase. i'm only 18, and i feel the same way. just a pebble on this road of life, you'll get thru it. i think maybe you always do. like hicks said, i loved the honesty here. cool potatoes. [eh? ive been naming fruits and vegetables in my comments the whole nite, don't feel tooooo special  ]-chris. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rhonda, I like the way that you write your feelings out with such honesty. Don't write just to please other, but to please yourself....just like you did here. As far as the guy is concerned, just keep being yourself and if it's meant to be, he will come around. (It wouldn't hurt to let him know that you'd like some poetry from him....you know, just a few hints here and there).  "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rhonda~ I've said it all before... So, just lots of *HUGS* ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"maybe I'm just dreaming of something that'll never happen" Hmmm...somehow, I don't think so. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You lay your sentiments out to dry in sunlight in this forthright piece, and that in itself is worth more than you think Keep writing, poetess of passion Liz |
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