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Open Poetry #24

Waterfall's Solstice

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-12-26 07:11 PM

Waterfall's Solstice

Summer hides, frozen in stalactite grip,
With just a hint of rushing water playing free,
As if to find escape in its constant run

And I,

I listen
To the falls,
Standing still as still, with no wish to run,
Letting the water talk to me,

Knowing that soon enough,
Summer will reign.

So will I.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-12-26 07:26 PM

Oh Karilea...how beautiful this picture, told as only you can. I love this!
TD

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-12-26 07:35 PM

Karilea---I can't imagine it being so cold that running water freezes....brrrr. You know I love the sun! Enjoyed the beautfy you saw and heard...I can imagine it. Thank you.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-12-26 09:31 PM

WHY,  I ask...can't the rest of us write
scenery as well as you and Martie do?

HUH?  Tell me....shhhh...whisper it....
I will put my hands to my ears....turn my
hearing aids up to max.....

Well?   You said it already!!??

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-27 01:35 AM

geez, where do you get these beautiful pics? and the inspiration to write them?

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-28 02:44 AM

Karilea~
This is lovely, in both picture and words.
Beautifully penned, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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