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| Open Poetry #24 |
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Incremental incisions |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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not yet not yet you did not get to me yet (I did not tell you) I am thicker than I used to be silently I smirk scar tissue in place to shield vital areas, recovery has now become succinct with bladed tongue you edge your way forward incrementally (we both know) you won’t stop until I bleed [This message has been edited by jellybeans (12-26-2002 05:36 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very precisely written and can capture many situations. Enjoyed this a great deal; wish you would post poems more often. Happy Holidays to you. Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
pat, thank you....happy holidays to you as well.....and yep wish I would post more often too.....but my muse is not cooperative when overworked and dead tired.....lol...I used to write more consitently, but now I would describe my writing as 'now and then'....sigh |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jellybeans If you see it coming so clearly, I wish you could just be somewhere where it didn't hurt you. Some circles are good, and some not...but they all just come around again. Wishing you the best.  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
"Some circles are good, and some not" did you ever say a mouthful....thank you martie...wishing you the best as well.... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Never have a shield when you need one! Your words are a straight arrow, center target--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well, dont let yourself bleed, write the bitch /bastard out of your head\ liked the poem, got me pissed off - this is good |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
jellybeans, I wish I could see your poetry here more often, too. You do know how to get your emotions out in a poem, sweetie.  Thanks for sharing, friend......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
sandpiper, inkedgoddess and garysgirl, thank you......your comments are much appreciated |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ouch! Those bladed tongues can inflict so much damage. *S* Perhaps instead of offering this surgical tape to bind wounds, we could tape mouths shut instead? *G* I like this one very much, Lovey. *S* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Excellent write. Pretty much agree with all the comments above...well done. jwesley |
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